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Orphan On The Snow

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Natalie Wilson, A 13-Year-Old girl, who like most of the other teenagers, is filled with the hope of a better future. But all of that shatters when she is captured by a cult, it is the end of the future, All her hopes and dreams crushed, She has to Escape, Little did she know what her future is gonna be... Credits to DragonsAreCool for making me this amazing cover! Link to her Deviantart, where you can find her other great artworks :) https://www.deviantart.com/dragonsarec00l

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CaptainChaos0301
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daniella19
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😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 Love the books by this author,this book is definitely going into my library. I highly recommend this book,the quality could use more of a professional touch,but overall it's good.

kuhaku_sora
kuhaku_soraLv3kuhaku_sora

It has an interesting concept and story! I like it. The author also has an exquisite taste for words that makes the world really outstanding. Natalie Wilson will be pleased for her awaited story! The only advises that I can give you are be sure to include words such as "the" and "a" in sentences. there are some words out there that needs this sort of things which will make your story much brighter and elaborate. Also, you need to fix the numerous commas and replace them with periods. In addition to that, you would also want to place some spaces over each periodical statments, dialogues, etc. And most importantly, it'll be better if you would write the story in a more formal way similar to what western books are written. In that way, readers would find it pleasant to read in. The words youve chosen are really great! it just needs a little polish. keep up the great work, mate!

Zane_Earth
Zane_EarthLv2Zane_Earth

hahahaha this was a great story with interesting plot. ii ound it thrilling and sad though on early chap(want to know which part makes me sad....please read the novel then hahaha).ohhhh <( ̄︶ ̄)><( ̄︶ ̄)>(ʘᴗʘ✿)(人 •͈ᴗ•͈)✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧

jazzclover
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What a great work, with so much potential!!!!. Apocalyptic survivors , even though a fiction , it takes time and a lot of imagination to write one and the Author has done a great job telling this story. All the best Author!!!.

Gideon_Johnson
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The author's constant warning of the book not being Romance is so funny😂😂 Good work author... Just work on the editing process of the book

caia_clearwood
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What a Synopsis!!!! Reading this book is like experiencing an amazing adventure in itself. the author Did a good job of creating each scene Vividly.

evdeepsithareddy
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wonderful novel, deserves to go into my library. what else can i say? read it for yourself. I just have the anticipation of what'll happen. Although this book isn't perfect, It isn't really professional, so most people wouldn't like it but for the ones who do, you've got taste.

amber0613
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Oh no! What happened to Natalie??? Please don't spoiler me, I will read all of this chapter to know what she did to escape. I hope she is okay.. I better read it now to know a lot about her condition. I might help her escape. OH MY GOSH! I will volunteer to help her escape!😁😁 Great job author, it really hooked me up. can't wait to read more of this.

Chaitzzz
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The writing quality is good and rarely can we see any mistakes. This is definitely a different story, I have never read anything like this before maybe I was ignorant, the story has a good plot and for those looking for romance, this isn't it.

God_Is_With_Me
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I love the concept of the story and how the author depicts. He's got me curious but I expect no less from such a talented Author🙇🏾‍♂️🙇🏾‍♂️🙇🏾‍♂️👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽

Beautiful_Mind
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I'm honestly speechless .... I'm so loving this and i highly recommend it. Keep up the good work ✨[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

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