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Old: Pandemonium of a Lazy Soul

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***Re-Write In Progress*** ------------------------------------------- Due to being asked by quite a few readers, I am posting this novel in Royal Road as well. It will be posted under my username Darkorb. I will provide the link once my story is approved on the site. ------------------------------------------------ A Soul who became lazy over time has to now try and not die for 25 years before he can go back to his home, where he can be as lazy and not be subjected to more tests and trials. ----------------------------------------------- Tags: No harem(harem sect please go away), System/LitRPG, Slow start. ----------------------------------------------- Please do advise me if you find any logical mistakes, but don't try to enforce your idea into my novel. I appreciate good feedback as all of you can guess English is not my first language. This novel is aimed at a certain target audience. Try to observe and interpret, very closely for any foreshadowing or clues I leave about many things in this novel and connect them like a puzzle before I reveal it to truly enjoy my novel. But do ask me questions and I will answer them. I like people who ask question and talk in my comment section. ---------------------------------------------- A big thanks to dragozx1 for drawing me the cover picture. Check out his page: https://www.fiverr.com/dragozx1/draw-character-designs-in-my-art-style ----------------------------------------------- All my contents are free and will never be locked behind a paywall. That is a promise from me. ----------------------------------------------- Check out the wiki for my novel. Note it was recently created any almost all information is missing from it. I would be glad if some of you could assist me in adding in info. https://pandemonium-of-a-lazy-soul.fandom.com/wiki/Pandemonium_of_a_Lazy_Soul_Wiki

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