New Earth- The Dungeon of Madness

Honestly a bit disappointing. First off the characters backstory seems completely inconsequential with the mcs personality. He’s supposed to be an experienced killer who was betrayed but you see nothing to support the effect this would have on an actual person. No distrust of others whatsoever, to the point that he completely trusts the first person he meets and tells them EVERYTHING about him. This makes no sense at all. The only reasonable explanation I can find is that he trusts her because she’s a girl. There are some other minor issues but this is the one that made me lose all interest in this character. It’s fine if you want to gradually rehabilitate the mc but do it slower not within the first 2 chapters. It’s almost like the main character described in the synopsis was a completely different character that the author scrapped as soon as they started writing and never went back to change the synopsis of the novel.

TL;DR: Great read, wouöd recommend. So this is the second novel in the same world as the authors first work. Since both stories are written in paralell, it is amazing to see both of them unfold from different perspectives. That alone makes the setup pretty unique, but wait! there is more! The MC is a good guy turned criminal who is tasked with building a dungeon. His insights and his way of thought give the believeable feeling that our MC is no fool and the author far from simple.

Synopsis Looks Pretty Interesting, Thought I Hope That This Will Not Be The Cliche Kind of Story. Will Update. BLT RECIPE Cook bacon until crispy, then drain on paper towels. Toast the 8 slices of bread. Spread 1 tablespoon mayo on each slice of toasted bread. (More or less, to taste). Add 1 slice of lettuce to 4 pieces of mayo-spreaded toast. Add 2 slices of tomato on top of lettuce. Arrange 3 slices of bacon evenly on top of tomato. (Break bacon slices in half to fit, if needed.). Add 1 slice of lettuce on top of bacon. Put the remaining 4 pieces of mayo-spreaded toast on top to finish the sandwiches

This is a well written Story. It plays in the same Universe as "New Earth - A world of Chaos". It is not necessary to read "A world of Chaos" to love the Story, but if you already read it you have some nice background stories to certain events (like "Hey there is the MC from the other Novel. Nice.." unimportant to the story, but a nice surprise for the reader). Both Novels have a lot of potential, but there is always one downside. The author announced he will write a third novel "New Earth - Blessings and Curses". I fear that the author bites of more then he can handle. The new novel will probably have a high potential too, but if one tries to write 3 Novels at the same time in his free time the story won't progress. I would prefer if the Author would focus on one Novel (please "New Earth - Dungeon of Madness) and finish it and write the other novels, one after the other instead of beginning 3 Novels and never finish one. I will not read the new novel "Blessings and Curses" because I expect it to go on hiatus in the middle of the book. (I hope the Author can prove me wrong). All in all. This is a nice Novel about Dungeons which will need a long time to finish.

Good story multiple plot twists and well crafted characters with ups and downs throughout its very well done but i wish it were updated more regularly.

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A complete copy of "Lazy Dungeon Master" by: onikage spanner it's a Japanese lightnovel, utter disappointment. If you haven't red the other novel I mentioned give this one a try it might have been worth your time since it has a different take on the novel more like a spin off of the original one.

In the first 35th chapters were spent in the training dungeon and he doesn't want to become a dungeon master. Basically what I'm saying is boring and the MCs disappointing.

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Love the story thus far instant fan. My main gripe is that it seems like the main character isn't holding up to his past. The skills he learned should have transferred with him as well allowing him to capitalize on the abilities to defeat his foes.

One of the best novels on this site, I don't know why it toke me so long to see it. Everything is will belt and thought. This novel is worth every minute.

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For me this is the best Dungeon novel ever!! The mc is a very complex character which is very interesting. And even the side characters have a great devolepment over time and become more complex as the story gos on. I love the way the dungeon can have so many possibilities and system works really well with it to. The story devolepment is just capturing and there are many unexpected twists and turns along the way. Once u start reading u don't want to stop anymore.

great novel i recommend to read it dont know why it isnt very popular there are many higher ranked novel that dont come close to it in my opinion so keep the good work give more chapter daily update will be great and it will be rank higher for sure

i am very happy i bumped into this novel. the whole dungeon master idea is very entertaining and new for me. i just read all the chapters in a breath :) no break at all. i can't wait to see what kind of dungeon the MC will create . thanks for the the hard work .

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Well written, with interesting characters and already building a pretty solid plotline. Hopefully we'll find out more about why the main is a criminal. Also, you made it sound like all the dungeons are criminals, but then the teacher dungeon says there is a full system for them in the world already, is the main just part of the latest batch?

Lastimosamente parece coincidir el último capítulo con la pandemia ojalá el autor esté bien y termine está novela que está bueniísima

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