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My redemption system

Adam reedz, a 17 year old high school student is at the edge of his will power to live in this cruel world after the heartbreaks and betrayal and pain. What happens when there is a blast from the past is waiting for him? What will he do with the new system? Will he choose the righteous path or use it for giving back all the hatred that the world has shown him. Why is he the chosen one? Find out more about in the adventure of Adam with his system that gave him redemption from the hell of a life ---------------- my Instagram id : thrillpill_007 email id : thrillpill0007@gmail.com I need you guys to pour in your thoughts on the novel and any changes that I need to do. I also request you guys to come up with cover page ideas for the novel. The selected idea's creator would be credited. Warning : mature content. 17+ highly recommended.

THRILLPILL_007 · Fantasie
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24 Chs

Him and Her

Adam moved closer to Jane shortening the distance between them to a few inches.

"Wha...What are you going to do?" Jane was flustered. Her heart started thumping wildly.

"You have chosen the wrong person to meddle with Jane. Now you have to face the consequence" he said with a smile that had hidden meanings. He suddenly wrapped his hands around her hips and pulled her towards him in smooth move.

"Adam...Don't fool around. We are in public. People might see us. Let me go." Jane said with her breathing getting ragged. She partially knew what Adam was about to do.

"Where's that proud girl attitude who played with my feelings? huh?" he asked still holding her tight. He could feel her breast heaving up and down.

"You started it first. Now let me go. We can't do this here." she said trying to get released from his grip.

Adam moved his head down towards her face. Surprisingly when their faces were inches away, Jane didn't try to oppose anymore. Instead she closed her eyes waiting for the inevitable.

Adam decided to tease her. He moved his face to her left shoulder and whispered in her ears "So are you suggesting that you are okay with it in private? You want it don't you?" he asked in a husky voice.

Jane's body shivered for a moment after hearing his voice. This was a new experience for her. For a girl who had no boyfriend for almost 3 decades, this was new and exciting. She slowly opened her eyes to meet with Adam's and said " I didn't suggest anything. I just---"

Before she could finish her sentence, Adam sealed her lips with his in a smooth lip kiss. He surprised himself about how smooth his kiss was. He was sure it was one of the perks of novice eros ability.

Jane's eyes widened for a moment before she closed her eyes to feel the kiss. Her first romantic kiss. The kiss which she was dreaming about from the time she laid eyes on him.

As the sun rose from the horizon brightening the entire scene, it was a beautiful romantic moment to watch.

As they were kissing, suddenly Jane felt something wet between her thighs. She was not a kid to not understand what it was. She was starting to get aroused.

'Damn. This is not good'

"mmm" she let out a soft moan.

She immediately broke the kiss fearing things might escalate. She didn't want people seeing her like that. As it was a small neighbourhood, word might get out before even things got real. She didn't want people to bad mouth her.

"Huft...Huft...Huft..." she was out of breath from the long kiss.

Adam placed his forehead over Jane's and asked in a soft tone "Will you accept me as your boyfriend, Jane?"

Jane didn't answer as she was still in a daze but nodded her head with a smile. She looked straight into his dark hazel eyes as if to search something in it. She realised that she loved the feeling and also she loved being with him.

Adam gave a charming smile before letting her go.

[Seduction +5 ; Charm +5 ; Passion +5]

Adam took Jane by her hand before moving to the chair. Jane was still in a daze. 'Is this all real. This is too good to be real.' she thought as she couldn't believe that a man she met accidentally would become her partner. That too in just two days.

"Jane. Come out of your dreams. Was my kiss that good to mesmerize you this much?" he asked chuckling.

Jane's cheeks turned beet red on the mention of the kiss. "I don't believe that you were not in a relationship before. That...kiss...was good in fact" she admitted albeit with great difficulty.

"You caught me guilty. Indeed I had a girlfriend in the past but not anymore." he said raising his hands as if admitting to some crime.

Jane had a troubled expression. She was happy that he didn't hide his past relationship. But still thinking they had broken up troubled her. "Did you guys break up a long time ago?" she asked.

"Are you sure you want to know about this?" he asked. It was not like he wanted to hide his past relationship but he thought it would ruin the moment they were having.

"Adam, I need to know about you and your life if we can be in a serious relationship." she said urging him to speak.

"Alright. I will tell you everything. But before that shall we go to my house. This is not the right place for it." he said.

"Sure. I will just inform my mother. She will be worrying." she said with a soft smile before getting up to call her mother.

As she walked away to call her mother, Adam's phone rang. When he looked at the caller, he had a loving smile on his face. The caller was none other than his sister Lissie.

"Hello Lissie. How are you doing?" he asked.

"I should be the one asking you that Adam. Where are you? What are you doing? Did you forget you have a sister? I was scared to the extreme." Lissie said with concern,

"Big sis, there is nothing to worry about. I have been doing well. In fact I'm doing very well." he said as he stole a glance at Jane who was speaking on the phone.

"Looks like you are in a happy mood brother. I thought you would be devastated by the repeated pain you suffered the past few days." she said sounding relieved.

"I'm different now sis. I no longer cry my eyes out for people who are not important to me." he said in a proud tone.

"So if you don't care anymore, why didn't you come to our home yesterday. Father said that you needed time to recuperate. But it seems that you are good to go. Please come back Adam. I miss you so much." she said.

"Probably I will come to that house to pack all my stuff before leaving it once and for all. I know you miss me Lissie, but I don't want to be in that house anymore." he said with resolve.

"Don't say that Adam. Father understood his mistake and he is ready to apologise. He even de-freezes your cards. You should give him a chance. Please." she said with a pleading tone.

"Lissie. This is my decision for now. Don't push me." he said.

"Alright. But know this Adam, there is a sister who needs your love waiting for you." she said in a sad tone.

"I know Lissie and I do love you. I will see you when I come back. For now, goodbye. I need to go." he said before hanging up.

He turned and saw Jane sitting on the bench. He went and stood before her and reached his hands before her. "Shall we go?" he asked.

"Yeah. Who was that?" she asked.

"A woman I love." he said as he saw a chance to tease her.

"What? How can you? You---" she started to panic. 'Does he have another woman apart from me. Did I make a mistake?' he thought to herself.

"Pfffttt... Hahahahaha. Jane, you are like a 10 year old who can be fooled easily. It was my sister Lissie. Silly." he said laughing.

"You...You like bullying me, don't you? I hate you Adam. Hmpf." she pouted cutely.

"Alright. Alright. Sorry my queen. Shall we go now?" he asked getting to one knee.

Jane gave a chuckle when she heard him address her as a queen. "You know how to please a woman. Alright let's go. I want to know about you. I want to peel your layers." she said before taking his hand.

They both walked their way to the mansion hand in hand.