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My Hybrid System, Long forgotten.

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In olden times, there was an orphan named Alec. Growing up without the knowledge of who his parents were, Alec was forced to live with his uncle who mistreated him and barely gave him a proper meal.  However, in an effort to get food he committed an unintentional crime whose penalty was death. When Alec was caught, he ran into the woods and was chased down by the local police officers, along with his uncle's sister, Elva. While running in the woods, he unconsciously stumbled over a tree root causing him to fall back down the hill. "No!!" He screamed as he rolled down the hill.  "Arrr!!" Alec winced in pain when he subsequently stopped rolling.  As he observed the damages he bought from the fall, he heard far away chatterings of the police officers after him. "Shit! They are nearby," Alec muttered in panic as he right away stood on his feet to continue running. However, just as he took one step farther from the place he stood, he fell inside a deep dark hole.  "No!!!!!!" Alec screamed as he went down the deep dark hole. The last thing he saw was a mild red light before passing out. "Where am I? " he asked, "What happened?" Just then a screen appeared before his eyes. [System processing…] [System activated] [You have successfully activated your Long forgotten hybrid system] "What?" This was where his ride began.  Now the fate of mankind lies in his hands as he keeps on completing quests and tasks to get stronger. The question is, will he be able to cease and defeat Lucifer? ******* Support the author with your votes. ********* Note to new readers, The first few chapters may appear similar to MVS if you have a look at it carefully but as the book goes it will take turns to become a story of its own. If you are not relaxed reading it, I will advise that you do not even begin but if you wanna stick with me till the story's transformation then I will be glad to have you as one of my readers. ********** Author's note, There might be a few grammatical errors in the first few chapters but I promise that as you read, you will get to revel the story.

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Ultimatefive
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Author here to drop one of these self-reviews. This is my first time writing a system novel so don't come here expecting it all to be perfect. Don't expect the grammar to be 100% perfect, but I make sure to reduce errors. If you come across errors do feel free to pinpoint them in the comment section. Finally, treat this as a Q/A section and I will do my best to answer them.

DaoistxYTRJ0
DaoistxYTRJ0Lv3DaoistxYTRJ0

A well-written book on system genre. I was pulled into Alec's world the moment I started reading. The description was on point. the character design was well crafted. Good job author.

Little_feelings
Little_feelingsLv2Little_feelings

I have never read a system story but this one hooked me to the core....................................................................... 🔥🔥

Chisin_You
Chisin_YouLv1Chisin_You

The word building and system organization is perfect. Continue with the good job author.........................................................................................................................Keep it up

KARMA_7
KARMA_7Lv3KARMA_7

You know what, it's pretty ok...there[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=ex[img=exp[ wasn't anything that bad so overall it is a decent book.[img=exp][img=exp]

Chukwuemeka_101
Chukwuemeka_101Lv3Chukwuemeka_101

You were right when you said that this book was inspired by MVS. I'm pretty sure that every MVS fan(including me) would love this book. The storyline is original since the only similarity with MVS is the system stuff and some of the procedures but... This book was so interesting that I gobbled up all the chapters in quick succession. Good job.

The_Pluviophile
The_PluviophileLv1The_Pluviophile

This book is superb! The writing quality is topnotch! Simplicity at it's peak and very, very, enthralling! Just added it to my shelves and I'd be sure to be on the lookout for more!!!

Hobified_Bbensplen
Hobified_BbensplenLv3Hobified_Bbensplen

The plot the settings and character were all organized and i like how the author is explaining it chapter bit by bit this is such a master piece i must commend the Author 🤜🤛 good work 👏 congratulations.... kudos to this wonderful work

AbdulfatahFatima
AbdulfatahFatimaLv4AbdulfatahFatima

Well done you did a great job on the character, the plot and story development this is my first time reading system stuff but I really enjoyed it because I took my time.

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