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My Demon Pet System

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After spending his entire life on gambling and alcohol, a man died alone in his cold apartment when life decided to give him a second chance. "Where am I?! What... what is this body?!" Reincarnated into a new and young body, he will remember nothing of his past, except for the name printed on the whiskey bottle he was drinking a moment before his heart stopped beating. "Yoichi," that will be his new name. One after another, words written in blood suddenly appeared on the wall before his eyes: "Welcome to your Demon Pet System, your second life redemption's attempt. Tame a Demon in the next 48 hours or die forever." In a world where humans and demons coexist and fight for supremacy, follow the story of Yoichi, a young man who will become the most powerful Demon Tamer of the World of Lumya. Brand New Cover by the brillant Tixer! https://www.fiverr.com/tixer_art Join the Discord Server for extra content: https://discord.gg/pfrfAfWKGG My Book of Yokai: https://discord.gg/8NdnFnXGAp Instagram: @immanioripse_author Twitter: @immanioripse Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/Immanioripse-Author-101625858453333

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Inhaltsverzeichnis
Volumen 1 :Rebirth
Volumen 2 :Dragon Flame

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Read all available chapters and so far the novel is good, not amaizing but still good. I have few problems with the novel: 1. World Background (so far): 1.1 This is my personal opinion but there are only 2 nations (factions as author calls them). One is on our continent the other on the enemy continent and that's it. For me that's close to nothing. There is Bronzewood ( or something like that) where MC comes from, there is village/town/city i forgot the name of because it was included in like 2 chapters, and then there is Godhaven (capital). Not only is the whole continent a single country, but is seems that even that country is small. MC reached the capital in like 2 hours or so from his godforsaken farm. 2. Story Development (so far): 2.1 This is my personal opinion (again), for me the development is too slow. Maybe that's authors' idea and it might pick up speed in later chapters, but still for 36 chapters he found out very little and basic information about the world he is in and travevled to Godhaven (capital city). His first mission was to capture demon in 48 hours and there are still more than 20 hours left, meaning 36 chapters descirbe only 20-30 hours. 2.2 The other think for me is that battles are too basic, there is only 1 skill that demon can use (I know thats only for now but still...) and demons from same species alway have the same abilities. You (author) could have put Mutation where the demon/pet mutates and gains diffrent skills, there are other ideas but you get the point - more uniqueness. 3. Character Design (so far): 3.1 This is my personal opinion (AGAIN), the character is too rash on making decisions, especially about rescuing the princess. Did he fall for her already? I know he says something about not being a 'Coward', but in my opinon that's whole diffrent level of 'Bravery' bordering 'Stupidity' and 'Simping' . That's just the begining so he may evolve, but that;s what i saw up until now. That's pretty much it all my ranting. Its still good, but yea.. P.S. Good luck with the novel author.

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