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Multiverse travel

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This is a multiverse travel story (I DO NOT OWN NOTING BUT MY OC ) (I don’t own the cover if you are the artist lmk if you want me to take it down ) First world: marvel earth 616 Post when I feel like it Also the mc will stay female

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Abhinav_Reddy_6592
Abhinav_Reddy_6592Lv1Abhinav_Reddy_6592

add a gender bender tag

James_0903_
James_0903_Lv13James_0903_

worst kind of fanfic. waste of time. don't bother reading it. 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂

FallenEclipse
FallenEclipseLv3FallenEclipse

You had the right idea for sure, I would genuinely read it, but your execution wasn't very good. I would say you need to drag out the chapters, like a lot. At least let your mc spend a few chapters in one world before moving on. All in all, it just needed some work and I hope you decide to continue this in the future. Just know this is just my personal opinion and. P.S: I forgot to write a review before so I'm going off of what I remember from the Story.

Alex_Nova
Alex_NovaLv4Alex_Nova

its not bad but its also not good the story feels like its all over the place and like its missing alot of info over all i guess its "ok?" for a first time?

iron_wolf
iron_wolfLv13iron_wolf

2/5stars, ........................................................................................................................................ nuff said

PABELO
PABELOLv3PABELO

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BadGuy737
BadGuy737Lv15BadGuy737

It is ok but it could some work.

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