Journey to Ascendance [Eventual Multi-Universes]

I will explain 1 by 1: World Background: 4 I gave it a four as the setting is complicated. You seem to have a mixture of Marvel/MCU/HP with cultivation. Very complicated. It has worked till now because you haven’t gone above and beyond to include all the other people. Unless you actively decide which characters will be featured, there is a huge chance you will actually ruin this. The Asgard relevant details are also a little mind blowing because they change everything. Character Design: 5 As far as I see it these are your OCs so no matter what they do, as long as their thought process is clear, it will be good. Writing Quality: 5 I haven’t seen any huge mistakes yet nor any in spelling or grammar. Very good. Updating Stability: 4 I didn’t read the details properly but 1 chapter is a little too less, especially per week. Story Development: 4 It’s slow but slow is pretty good. As long as you flesh things out properly. I will observe your work with great interest! Keep it up!

only problem i have is the cover and tags on the story page I thought It was a male MC not female xxxxxxxxxxx x xxx x x x x x x x x x x x

Hello Everyone! The Author writing a review for his own novel. The Writing Quality: 5 Let me explain. I am not translating this and I try to use the best and simplest way to explain and write. It should be understandable by all, I hope. Only in English so I apologize for that. Stability of Updates: 5 I intend to post 1 Chapter a week at the very least. An average chapter's length is above 5,000 Words so I believe that the update rating is pretty fair. Story Development: 3 I intended to take it slowly at first but the pacing has been increased now. The development of the story takes time and effort. I fully intend to put in all that but the first arc has been incredibly slow. We are speeding up but for now... Character Design: 4 I have designed the OC-SIs who are the MCs and I find their personalities pretty alright. Albus is the absolute neutral/little chaotic but he is moving for his family. Eleanor is the neutral good but doesn't realize that quite yet. World Background: 3 While I did give my own spin to the universe that I created, I am mostly relying on people having watched Harry Potter and have some knowledge of Marvel Characters... Do Give me a Review on what you all think.

Nice work! The characters are great and the story is slow but I like it! Can you explain the updates properly to me? Like is it twice a week or once a week. Look forward to where this is going!