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In Lookism as a system for Daniel Park

THIS IS MADE AFTER WATTPAD TRAUMATIZED ME. So to save and protect other people eyes. i took it in my hands to make a lookism fanfic. Without Any Lg Sh*T. The fanfic is pretty simple. A guy die. Guy meet Rob. Guy spin wheel. Guy gets To be A system. And gets the Perfect body Of Daniel park. Guy happy. Now the guy makes changes in the plot. He will show why Charles took interest in the second body. He will show what is the ture power of it. Wannna know what happens when you send a guy with as a system and gave him hack's. Read to find out. Welcome to my fanfic. Hope you will stick with me to the end of it.

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CHAPTER 32 : THE PERFECT MEETING.

Recap: system is facing taejin and is angry for poor choice of words of taejin. And is also knows that his task is to make a ever lasting impression on the Characters he will encounter.

Reading guide.

First affiliate arc.

I will call little Daniel. Og Daniel.

And the perfect body one sb ui Daniel.

So any questions ask in the comments.

I hope you enjoy it.

Story starts here:

The pressure was something taejin never felt. He even saw the elder son of garpyoung, If he were to compare it.

This pressure is on a different level, But the difference could be compared kos was also not serious when taejin meant him.

The pressure just vanished like ot was never their. With his face in the hands of the masked man.

Taejin asked who he was. But he didn't got a good response, who was him, what is his relation with vin.

But the response he received, was something which was not considered. The man said he was Night mare. And was gonna send him to meet vin sister.

But the pressure vanished, like it was never ever there. The whole ordeal about pressure felt like a dream.

Taejin felt like he was in a dream, but that dream soon turned into a nightmare. We go back a couple of minutes before this encounter.

Taejin was having a blast. He just had a great reunion with vin, and just had a blast beating him. And mocking his dead sister.

But that happiness lasted for a couple of minutes as now he is a grip. Far stronger then vin.

Taejin who just causally took pryed off vin hold. Now is struggling really hard just to get enough space for his nose to breathe.

Just when he thought it was not getting any bad the grip was tighting around his whole face. If felt like someone is holding his head with pilers.

Taejin thoughts run rampant ' What the fk, How is this monster grip this strong, who is he, and what is his relationship with vin'.

Taejin  uses all his strength but fails. Looking through the gap of the fingers which are clamped on his face.

He cannot see the guy face due to the dragon mask which the man was wearing. Seeing no way he could get the grip off.

Due to the mask he cannot see the expression. This pisses taejin off. So he turns his attention to mask. And uses his right hand trying to pull the mask off.

Taejin attempt to take off the mask failed. His hand is caught by the wrist. The hand is then taken to the side away form the mask.

System seeing taejin trashing around like a fish out of water, just to get put of the grip.

System returns the favor of before "Maybe you should struggle a bit more, just like her".

If were to see the expression under the mask. We should have seen a little smirk on his face.  Taejin hearing this, He feels like he is Begin toyed with.and is sent into a rage.

And he kicks system in the stomach. To push him away and to get out of the grip. This attempt proves successful. System is forced to take a step back.

Due to the kick landing at his mid section, The kick didn't do anything to him. But made him feel a bit annoyed.

As his face was released. With deep red marks clearly visible, form the place where the hand was. Even on his color.

Taejin takes  deep rapid breaths, to get fresh air to his brain and organs. Just when is feels that he is in ok condition.

He looks at his right hand which was still in the grip of his assailant. A look of fear flash's in his eye.

But to his surprise the grip is released. Looking at him and getting a clean look. He sees a man wearing a suit and a dragon mask.

Hiding his face with only eyes visible. That seems to have no emotion in them.  Taejin quickly takes a look around to see. If his opponent has anyone else to help him.

But seeing none, He breaths a sigh of relief. Now taejin feels he has a shot of winning. He might have Lost in strength, But in technique.

Taejin gets a bit of confidence, Taking his stance of kudo. With left fist rocking back beside his ribs and the right fist extending. Taking a chair type stance.

And says his cringe intro to style. "It all originates form japan, my karate my judo. And the my combat style in which everything goes. Kudo".

This is the stance of kudo, Which taejin just used to show vin who was the stronger amoung them.

Taejin looks at his opponent and sees him. Standing Their without getting in a stance. Taejin without speaking anything else rushes to attack.

System is left feeling awkward by such intro. And is thinking about leaving fast to avoid getting taejin disease.

System is taken out of his stupor. Due to taejin movements.

Dashing to get close, when he is in a hands reach of his adversary.

He Punchs with his left hand. But his attack is dodged by stepping to the side. Taejin seeing how his attack was dodged. Uses his right to  deliver a chop strike which was aimed at system neck.

But the strike is blocked by system. Who was in state of moving. Is forced to block the strike to stabilize him self.

Which made him take a couple of steps backs. Taejin seeing his opponent take a couple of steps back. Due to the force of his strike.

This gave him a bit of confidence and says in tone which can make all want to rip his tongue out. "What your first attack, just caught me off guard. Now i am serious try and touch me". And gives his smiles, which makes us all want to kill him.

The smile of taejin face is turned upside down. System also takes a stance similar to him. Not its was like he is standing in front of a mirror.

System also takes the stance of kudo which he copied form taejin. And followed his attack pattern.

But the difference of speed and strength was clearly visible. A left  punch landed on his gut followed by a right chop to the neck.

The same moves were performed in the same manner but speed and strength were on a level which taejin couldn't have imagined.

All that happened soo fast taejin had no time to react. But he felt the force of the attack like it was in slow mo.

The fist that landed in his gut made him want to vomit blood and food. But he could not do the process,

The chop on the neck. Was even worse he felt like he was hit with such force which he cannot explain in words.

The force of the chop made him, do a half spin. As his head clashed in the ground. Taejin was left on the ground in 2 strikes.

Taejin is left to his own thoughts on the cold floor. His thoughts were ' Fu** I can't feel any part of my body. What no who the hell os this monster, His strength and speed  is on another level. I felt i had a chance but he was just toying with me'.

System stands looking at taejin, But taejin doesn't move. And is out like vin. With a fist mark on his stomach and a mark on his neck. 

Moving near him. Grabbing taejin by the neck  and lifting him. In the air. System looks at taejin.

With the thought of ending him. System eyes turn even cold. As he remembered taejin words form before. While our character is left to his thoughts.

What is taejin thinking. He is hosted in the air with him. Begin on the verge of death. By suffocation.

Taejin thinks ' Fuck is this how its gonna end. Is this the karma for me. I guess the past sins have caught up to me'.

Taejin stops struggling. As a peaceful smile comes on his face accepting the end. With taejin final thought begin ' I might not have been the best man. But life still had its charm'.

System seeing taejin stop struggling and looking at taejin expression. Is shocked and disgusted.

Keening him in the ribs. System throws taejin away like a trash. Looking at him. Still breathing.

System turns away going into the affiliate to meet. The perfection, The nightmare of gen 2. Walking further into the darkness. To find the secrets that have been buried.

Taejin who was left on the floor defeated. Or the correct words negged. Takes a phone out of his pocket.

Calling someone he speaks in small words with pain in each word "Unexpected, someone strong. Here monster went inside, hurry". And collapsed.

Leaving the man on the other side of the phone in deep thoughts. Cutting it. The man thinks 'This is getting even more fun, Then expected'. With the struggling to copy the style.

He is also holding a paper in his arm, Like a script of some sort. But we will know who the man is. Soon

After a while of walking system comes across 2 ways one going straight and one to right. 

Walking straight,  system comes across many doors.

System hears someone screaming behind him. The words were " Lets run. I gotta find big bro Samuel. I need to save him".

Just when he was gonna walk straight. He was bumped by the side. With the owner of the voice on the ground.

Holding his head. Hwang felt like he hit himself in the wall. Looking up. He sees a man wearing a suit and a dragon mask.

Which looks scary for him. Thinking the man didn't noticed him. Hwang didn't moved.

System looks at hwang. Who just forze while looking at him. Seeing him not move. System speaks " Well, Hello their, do you know where can i find Daniel park. The big one. Not the alley leader one".

Hwang looks at the man who spoke to him. The vocie was strangely familiar but at the same time. Hwang thought that it could be that he is imagination.

But listening to the man question.and the name he spoke hwang felt insulted. So he corrected him. "It's allied not alley. I hope you will remember it".

Hwang didn't knew where did ge got the courage to speak to a strange man. Like that.

But hwang thought he looked cool. And so he turned and left. Or the correct words will be he ran. Without looking back.

While he was running he felt he saw someone familiar form the conor of his eye.  Taking some steps back. Hwang screams "  Brother Samuel. I am sorry".

While tears streamed down his face. He ran toward Samuel, without knowing that he was running toward the danger.

Hwang didn't knew when sameoul arrived in front of him, But he knew brother sameoul was angry.

The fist which was aimed at him. With speed faster then anything. Hwang felt it was right to be hit. He angered brother sameoul.

He let money power get to his head. Which leaded him. To leave all the friends ship behind. But most importantly, He left his elder brother behind.

But the fist was held. By someone hwang clearly felt the air hit his face. The punch was held by the strange man. Which hwang just spoke carelessly.

While hwang was in his own turmoil. Sameoul was muttering something crazily " Your not my father. My father is the legendary kim garpyoung. Your not my father, you're just an ac salesman".

System holding sameoul hand. Now looks at him properly and feels the only and the right thing to do here is spread the greatness of the legendary Ac. Genius.

He felt it was sameoul right to know. About the memes. Ahem i mean the level on which his father was. The legend on par with Mother of all bad Ass.

System speaks in a mysterious tone "So your ac genius son, The man who was said to be even above kim garpyoung, To see he left a legacy begin, Sameoul You should stand proud, Why beacuse your his son".

Sameoul looked at the man. Thinking he will be mocking him. But his words made him. Doubt was his dad really that strong.

But the doubt is shirt lived. He felt the guy was mocking him. He was saying his father was weak. He was nothing. So with saying anything thing else.

Samuel attacked with his Right hand. To deliver a liver punch. Which is also caught. Both sameoul hands are caught.

But does that stop sameoul. Going for a headbutt. But sameoul vision is turned upside down. He was thrown using akido.

Begin the crazy guy he is. He trys to grab the masked man head or hair. To pull him to the ground with him.

But his hands are grabbing empty air. The masked man had similar thoughts to him. He saw a fist near his face.

Which connected and smashed him in the ground. The force of the strike was enough to damage the floor.

A shockwave was sent through the room. With sameoul on the ground out cold. 

Sameoul always thought of him self as the son of garpyoung. But one day his real father came back form getting the milk.

The fantasy of his father Begin the legendary kim garpyoung. Failed the reality is always disappointing.

So this sent him into frenzy seeing his father the legendary Ac genius. Sameoul was sent in to craze form the aura alone.

Seeing what he did to his son. The ac genius once again set out on the journey to get milk. Which can cure sameoul.

Sorry for the kidding. But allow me to explain sameoul in simple words.

Sameoul always thought of the wrong man as his father. Sam mother was also abusive. So this further got sam to be disconnected.

The bullying didn't help him. Get any better so when he found a pic in the house of him mom. With a man he thought he was hos father. Boom baam wham.

When the real came back. All the fantasy about begin accepted begin the honored one. Turned to ashes.

Fate. Many people have their own view of it. Some say it's written. Some say you write your own fate. And some believing fate has its own will. Which likes to joke to people.

Am not a philosopher but tell me what is your thought about it.

The fate played a joke on sameoul the joke which lead to a darker path. To find recognition.

After all sam wanted was to be recognized for his efforts. But he was always denied of it. Which lead to his current state.

System looks at sam on the ground who had just been knocked out. By him looking at him system felt pity.

Seeing someone on screen is something else. But looking at them in real is something else. At such age begin driven to such places.

This all said how desperate he was. May he gets the recognition he wants. Turning around system leaves.

As hwang tends to sam. While leaving system looks at the door and sees jake kim standing.

Jake looks at system and then at sam and spoke " I am here to save him. But looking at him now. It looks like he doesn't needs my help. So ignoring sameoul. You wanna introduce yourself to me". 

These words were said in a friendly tone. But system doesn't want to waste any more time. Then he already had.

Ignoring jake system leaves without answering him.  System goes out to find the allied leader.

Jake is left in the room standing. Jake saw the whole fight. Sam and him were equals. But that guy just defeated him in 1 strike.

Looking at the damage. Jake is sent back to the third affiliate. He felt the same feeling as facing Daniel back in the second affiliate.

If not. He felt that the man was even stronger then. Daniel

He knew he can't defeat him. So he let him leave. Jake turned his attention to hwang. And asked " Who was that guy. And what is he doing here". 

Hwang told jake. What he knew. Which left jake thinking ' If i had strength like him. I would have been able to protect everything and everyone important to me'.

Jake remembered his talk with lighting. Who told him. That each person had their own power. And once they find it the can overcome anything.

The blood kim garpyoung flows in jake veins. The blood which left a huge burden behind.

Sometimes Jake thinks if he was an ordinary kid. With kim blood. Would he have lived differently. His answer is always different.

The blood which carries a burden. Also carries the power to hold or over come that burden. Jake can only try his best to find his power.

Leaving jake to his thoughts we see that system has reached his destination. Just when system was about to enter.

He hears the voice of Daniel saying eith fury in his tone "You didn't have to go that far. Bitch".

System knows he needs to teach og Daniel some manners. But luckily for him someone else was already their to teach him.

Punched in the jaw.og Daniel is sent flying. Making a counter he uses a question mark kick. Which is grabbed by the sb UI Daniel.

Tossing og Daniel like a rag around the room slamming him in the ground and then slamming him in the wall.

Sb ui Daniel leaves the leg then uses a back spin kick aiming at og Daniel face. Which is dodged by rolling away.

Sb body follows with a super man punch. Which is also dodged. Using the hand which was on the ground.

He launched himself towards og Daniel. With dropkick aimed at og Daniel chest area.

System looked at the whole fight form the door step. This was not a fight but one sided  beat down. System knew that og Daniel cannot fight properly against. Perfect body.

Standing up og Daniel gets a second wind. Acting cool thinking he is the mc. He spoke in a protagonist tone "I am just starting at my full pow".

Before og Daniel can finish the sentence. A hand was placed on his shoulder. With system standing behind him.

Og Daniel seeing the mask and the dress thinks that the man belongs to second affiliate.

Without hesitation he attacks the man with a spinning elbow aimed at his face. But his attack is blocked easily. Og Daniel is left in confused.

While system seeing such a look on og Daniel face is amused. Putting his hand on his head and ruffling the hair a bit.

System speaks in an amused tone "Why don't you take jay away. I would like to have talk with my old friend".

Og Daniel is confused. He never saw the man. Even when he was using the perfect body. But the man spoke like he knew the second body.

Thinking how could the man know the perfect body. Og Daniel asks him a question "Who are you and what is your relation with Daniel".

System laughs at og Daniel question. But answers in a bit of amused tone " Well due to some circumstances i cannot tell you my name. But you can call me nightmare. And how i know the perfect Daniel. We both have a bit of history and almost the same backstory. So why don't you do us both a favor and take jay and get out for a while so i can have a talk with him".

While system and og Daniel had such a long talk sb ui Daniel stood their. Bot moving a muscle.

Og Daniel quickly picks up jay and takes him to the side.

All while sb UI Daniel eyes on system. Looking at him with the eyes which were showed no emotion.

Showing curiosity wanting to know who the person is under the mask. System moves near him.

Both stand face to face. With system begin a bit taller. Due to the experience card. Both of them now looking each other in the eyes.

Even With throwing any fist. Both fighters are trying to over power the other aura. If someone were fo see this secene.

They would have seen sb ui Daniel having a blood red aura. Which brings out the eyes of ui even more.

While system having a black aura with some red and purple highlights. The both aura colliding. 

The fight between perfections to see. Who stands begin the victor.

Both fighters attack each other at incredible speeds.

Story ends here.

I hope you like the chapter. Pls tell me what reward should o give system for this quest.

And also tell me which part you liked. And tell me how can i improve minor's things. Also leave an example for me to understand ot even easily.

Leave a vote and comment on the chapter to give me motivation.

For the reward what should i give a skill. Or some items. Fighting style or something else tell me. In the next chapter i will list the choice's for it till then pls help ne select one of these 3 options.

Fighting style

Items

Skills

Have a good day and night bye.