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In Danmachi with A Jujutsu Kaisen System

Autor: Zekt
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B6_12nn3
B6_12nn3Lv1B6_12nn3

Honestly this fic is very underwhelming. While the grammar is decent the quality of writing itself is pretty mediocre. The interactions between people and the dialogues are very bland and uninteresting, the man hating goddess having a crush on him after a short interaction its just a classic case of making other characters dumb to make the mc look good. His training arc is the most disappointing thing ever i feel like you gave absolutely no thoughts into it" he was fighting a tiger and their fists collided" really? Then few months later he was training against tiger,bear and an eagle AN EAGLE seriously?He is influenced by sukuna and has violent nature yet he feels attraction towards women? This is literally just an edgy mc. The whole fic altogether is extremely fast paced.

Zekt
ZektAutorZekt

Will be updated after 100 chapters. I take constructive criticism, I don't mind negative reviews obvioulsy but that doesn't mean I like bots, trolling, or unserious reviews.

24cristiaan
24cristiaanLv1024cristiaan

Just because her name is Enkidu, she has already won me over, now that she has Sukuna's powers and a similar personality, she has already become one of my favorites. I hope you don't abandon her like most people who use Sukuna.

jaro_onody
jaro_onodyLv3jaro_onody

started verry intresting , but the moment he met atermis his personality did 180. also the way you write artemis is a bit lame where is the strong woman that hates man and would shoot you the moment she saw you.

ExtraordinaryMe
ExtraordinaryMeLv12ExtraordinaryMe

pretty nice intel now, the Author tries to be original which I like personality change, joining Artemis Famlia, and how the system works. I just think making him half-cursed spirit is just unnecessary you could give him mind protecting skill. i only hope the Author wouldnt nerf the mc, Sukuna can solo this verse if the mc will become weak it would be very boring

NyxOuroboros
NyxOuroborosLv11NyxOuroboros

Super op love . . . . . .

OXCL
OXCLLv3OXCL

i hope the update will fast ⊂((・▽・))⊃(・∀・)^_^

SkyRexx
SkyRexxLv14SkyRexx

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GuDaoistBigbro
GuDaoistBigbroLv14GuDaoistBigbro

honestly, i wanted the see what having an actual king of curse would do to a world made of gods. but so far the dialogues between the mc and potential love interest is so cringe i feel empty. good 🤞.

firat_Vural
firat_VuralLv13firat_Vural

I very much like it. Keep up the good work man. And please don’t drop

David_Sao_Ainkrad
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WTF_WTF
WTF_WTFLv4WTF_WTF

Grammar is 5/5 Story Development 1/5: I don't know what author is thinking sacrificing his sense of taste, and then some readers actually defending it as a good thing. Saying that 70-80% of taste is actually from smell. Not sure where they got it but even if we trust that information, it is still stupid. The sense of taste is one of the crucial factor for human survival, imagine this, you are thirsty, you saw a water bottle so you drank it but if you have sense of taste you would know that the water is actually salt water. Now you have UTI, kidney stones, etc. Character Design 1/5 Not sure, I stopped in order to give this feedback. Updating Stability 3/5 It's just an average fanfic, the author would probably be the same like others who would lose interest and drop it. In any case the update are quite good for now. World Background 1/5 it's a fanfic, the world is danmachi. Only the story is different but the world is the same.

DavidRK
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Somerandomguyerere
SomerandomguyerereLv1Somerandomguyerere

Bro has some stuff to fix and he/she has some things to keep doing good at. Overall the story has potential and the author seems to really care so I'll rate it five stars just off that.

Burner_1451
Burner_1451Lv1Burner_1451

Author really has to fix something but it got potential so Imma invest a five star. Hopefully author-san realizes and fixes his mistakes which with some of the Author's notes it seems like he is trying

CBLO
CBLOLv2CBLO

Author has to work on some stuff like pacing and a plan but other that its pretty good better then what I thought at least. Also I don't know why webnovel says I haven't read anything but I read to chapter 15 for anyone wondering

Lizrock
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aman10
aman10Lv4aman10

You should rewrite as Sukuna in danmachi in which mc will be reincarnated in sukuna body and powers , make it like empire building or slice of life your current fic is crack fic and you can read other author works to get a idea and implement them

Bomberman
BombermanLv4Bomberman

approved for now .

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