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Lesen Sie den Roman I messed up my book. des Autors DaoistKushMountain, veröffentlicht auf WebNovel.I was trying to submit this work to the contest and was informed that for it to qualify I must enter before I actually write. The only way for me to enroll is to make a new book with the same name and...

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I was trying to submit this work to the contest and was informed that for it to qualify I must enter before I actually write. The only way for me to enroll is to make a new book with the same name and erase my progress here. you guys can find the new book under the same name. the book you guys were reading it still under my profile and under the reviews in "more from this author"

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Shameless review from the Author. It's not going to be the best story out there, I'm an amateur writer and still improving. I can take your critics, give them to me. The main character got trapped inside a videogame when he was 14, so its safe to say he didn't develop as well as some of the readers. He's also an unreliable narator and loves to hear the sound of his own voice. The world still has a lot left to show, I hope you guys join me in the unraveling of this story.

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