Game of thrones: A new lion

4,5 stars -2 - because a lot of drama, the amount of drama with Joanna's death is unbearable, you know you're going to die, you've had many years to conform or do something about it, now you're making a mega cringe drama = 2,5 star

Aaarerghhh!!!! the cringe drama in this story is just too frustrating, it's like making a mountain of molehill, you could have done it over the chapters with moderation but nope, you went all in, therefore I'm all out of this novel, bye, good luck tho.

Using my authors privilage here. Writing the start for me is always an issue. I have the story mostly planned and well this is not going to be show compliant. Hopefully this would come out as i intended

i can't understand how people call it frustrating and how death of Joanna got to do with calling "Not worth reading" the whole novel...i think you don't know how many writer's commit suicide due to such personal attacks in name of constructive criticism...😒 Which they are totally not

It was good until the death of his mother and then it became unbearable to read and had to drop was not worth reading anymore ............

otima fanfic espero que continue lançando e gostaria de dizer que a historia e muito boa.

Great while it lasted.. few grammatical errors, nothing crazy. I don’t know why aithor dropped but regardless it was a decent read… Pity

Exp.....................................................................................................................................................

╭━╮╱╭╮ ┃┃╰╮┃┃ ┃╭╮╰╯┣┳━━┳━━╮ ┃┃╰╮┃┣┫╭━┫┃━┫ ┃┃╱┃┃┃┃╰━┫┃━┫ ╰╯╱╰━┻┻━━┻━━╯ ╭━╮╱╭╮ ┃┃╰╮┃┃ ┃╭╮╰╯┣┳━━┳━━╮ ┃┃╰╮┃┣┫╭━┫┃━┫ ┃┃╱┃┃┃┃╰━┫┃━┫ ╰╯╱╰━┻┻━━┻━━╯