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Fate's Reversal: The Divines Return

Autor: Syphiinz
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BEFORE SARA

The story is about two childhood sweethearts who did everything together. She is so happy today because,she was going to attend the same college wih her bestie. The boy's name is Dicky Salvador he is 19 years old,and girl's name is Cher Quinn she is 17 years old. They both studied and got 'A' in the exams and test. They both participated in the quiz and they always win their quiz. One year later,it is the final year's graduation they did everything accordingly. After the graduation they went to a party there were singer's,dancer's,and played so many games. Cher and Dicky got drunkshe was going to sleep in a room, and when she was changing her dress. She felt someone's presence when she turned she saw Dicky he was attracted to Cher's beauty. She told him to go but didn't pay heed to her words he told her that. He had always loved her since childhood he expressed his feelings so did Cher do the same. They got intimate with each other the next morning. Dicky woke up and saw Cher sleeping next to him and she also wako up. They both didn't remember anything that happened last night they went home and freshened up. In the evening his father told him that he is going to do his MBA in London. He had booked his tickets and its tomorrow evening.It was his dream that he will do his MBA in London,he called Cher and shared the good news to her. They went for a date in a coffee shop sat down and discussed about his work. They talked until they were tired. He came back and packed all his belongings and in the evening. They escorted him to the airport and did good bye to him. The next day when Cher was dressing for her lectures,she started to feel nauseous she went to vomit. She came back and saw her mother she asked her what has happened. She said she was feeling giddy she went to the bathroom again,and she asked her for the second time. She said was feeling feeling nauseous and pains in her belly. She rushed to the washroom again when she returned,she started feeling hot. Its like her body was on fire,she was feeling and fainted. The doctor came and checked it confirmed that she was pregnant,and she should take care of her. Her escorted the doctor out when she came back after a few minutes Cher woke up. She asked her mother and she told her she fainted and that she is pregnant. She told her mother that she didn't get intimate wuth anyone. She started crying and recalled everything that happened,between her and Dicky two days ago. She went to school after that dive months has already past. She was happy because she won't be seen by anyone and that she is pregnant. That she is gonig to do her BTECH for three months and vacate for two months. Before she even realised four months has already passed and she has finished her BTECH. When she was returned to her house she had labour pains and was sent to the hospital. They did a CS on her she had a pretty baby girl and was named Sara Quinn. Cher's mother Abby and father Gerald told Dicky's parents,about their son impregnating their daughter. Dicky's father Lamar and mother Khloe told them that,since their he to London he haven't been picking. Abby and Gerald said they should try and contact their son,as soon as possible and take responsibility for his immaturity. Now stay tuned for what will happen in Dicky,Cher and Sara's life in BEFORE SARA. ---------------------- ----------------------

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Syphiinz
SyphiinzAutorSyphiinz

Alright, so I guess this is the obligatory norm in this situation? But this is the 10th review. So I shall, ahem...shamelessly give myself 5 stars. As well as offer my own personal critique of my novel. I will avoid spoilers and only give what I think needs to be said. **Take this with a grain of salt as I am a completely new author striving to hone my skills. For starters, as this is made there are slightly over 60 chapters to the serialization. Much of the world has yet to be explored on both front; however, this wasn't the purpose of Volume 1. The background of the game world has been given but the complete state of both the real and game world hasn't. This will serve the purpose of generating flow in the next volume. I will try to intricately formulate scenarios that express the world's state without providing humongous lore dumps. As for character molds, I tried to veer away from the scripted and make their reactions fleshly and oftentimes comical depending on the situations. Characters with backstories, however, will have more distinct personality scenes as showed a few chapters already. Some might think the pacing for the level up and character gains are too swift, BUT, I try to this to the idea of low levels usually passing by quickly as with a real game. However, the novel will be incorporating many different paces to add diversity. So sit tight on that. Moreover, the common tropes found in these novels—I try to develop mine further. For example, the random reincarnation is not so random and instead facilitated by a being. Secondly, the random teacher making the MC OP ties into a deeper purpose; the power creep isn't easily gained. All in all, I've put a fair amount of effort that continuously accumulates into this novel. As a result, I hope you enjoy this novel as much as possible if you do give it a read. Thank you~

Dotencsure
DotencsureLv3Dotencsure

I am the exp of my sword. webnovel is my body, and exp is my blood. I have created over a thousand useless review. Unknown to death, nor known to life. Have withstood pain to create many reviews. Yet, those hands will never hold anything. So, as I pray...Unlimited Exp Works!.

8Eight
8EightLv38Eight

Not gonna lie im kinda surprised about how few reviews this novel has and i think you should read it if you like game/mmo novels HOWEVER you should be warned, its one of those mmorpg novels where the game is something more than just a game eg something from the game can be used outside etc. most close comparisons would probably be novels like "guild wars" and "shuras wrath" if you care about game balance you are gonna have a field day. all titles and unique things are hilariously broken. anyway i cant complain about writing or updates, mostly typos updates are pretty consistent so +1 from here the story, there is some things which i dont really like, however they are personal preferences so i cant really hammer the author for that (mostly cultivators and swords) the development is pretty fluid and my biggest gripe is the huge amount of time spent in the desolate world/realm? and the short time between powerups, you dont really get a feel for how strong he really is. personally i wouldnt mind a slower burn with more detailed actions and descriptions. but still good +1 here Characters are excellent, i expected nothing and got a pretty good return. the cast we have some background on is really quite likeable, has flaws and strong points, sure it aint no shakespeare but is really quite good for a free webnovel. funnily enough i find the cast compelling enough for me to overlook my bias against swords and cultivators. the author has a good kind of eccentric way of writing, you can call it a bit edgy, but i find it quite compelling speeches specifically. combined with some pretty wholesome intimate parts. all in all i really like the characters +1 the world is probably the least developed both in and out of vr it does the job alright, but has minimal descriptions it is only 60 chapters so far, so take it with a grain of salt, packing character development and world building into 60 chapters is gonna be a challenge for even the best of writers suggestions/preferences as stated before i wouldnt mind the novel to burn a bit slower, things happen pretty fast i enjoy the details and descriptions of the world around him alot. a bit more world building and you are golden. i would say more chapters but on this point us readers will probably never be satisfied. best of luck with your novel -88

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BL00DYLv4BL00DY

great writing quality with good sense of humour perfect start of story with great continuation characters is interesting (a lot of changes in emotions) stabile updating with great new content in each chapter great world background in VRMMO game as well as real world as story is in game and real life continue hard (hopefully pleasant) work

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Best novel about VRMMO games but it's even better that novel will continue as fantasy world. I give 5stars and I'm waiting for next chapters.

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This story has a great premise! This book for real broke all expectations I had for it. Keep up the good work and this story will go places. 10/10 for sure!

cackles24
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It gives me the vibes of "Reincarnation of the strongest sword god". Perhaps it was inspired by it, but I hope it will not turn into the loop of ever-stronger guilds to fight... So far it gives me a lot of hope for a good long successful novel that would be one of the best of the mmorpg genre novels. Slight critique is that the world building feels slightly rushed, but if that means the novel will not be too slow paced and kills the interest of impatient readers like myself, so be it. **: first review ever, love the novel so far and best of luck.

fernando_viana
fernando_vianaLv3fernando_viana

Adoro a história e como ela começou, só não entendo por que adicionar cultivo e esses "VitaShakes" à uma história na qual é baseada em jogo, em vez de enfatizar a habilidade do MC. É igual outra história que li aonde o foco praticamente deixou de ser o jogo para ser quem tinha se "cultivado" ou tomado mais "VitaShakes". A história é sua e respeito, mas sinceramente perdi em 90% a vontade de continuar lendo. Estou no Cap.81 é quando aparece o chefe dos Titãs e percebi que vai ser uma merda, posso está enganado, mas desanimei.

SupremeLank29
SupremeLank29Lv3SupremeLank29

Action - Op two swords wielding SAO style but a hundred times better with time magic/law Romance - although it is a little too easy to get into the harem in my opinion the romance is after Comedy - Modern comedy we all love and enjoy R-18 - some of the best I've seen! Mature - meh Sword and magic - a desent rpg classic type Cultivation - although it is confusing at times to be honest they all are! Harem - currently : Moon goodess /empress (not now but its currently the path shown) Wolf girl (npc but as the plot moves you realise...😉) Angel healer (class seraph but an elf) Sword spirit (hehe) Crafter ( demon lawyer in real life) Kingdom building - Goal: Celestial kingdom Current(ch 140):...Uh..W-..Well...Um.. Reincarnation - There's a solid reason why he came back (ch 110 ish reason reveled )

Rittzy
RittzyLv4Rittzy

A work of art definitely. Story progress smoothly and positively, and continually proves the fact that it is both unique and effective in its writing. The author effectively is able to build the world and the story with intricate details and word play that shows they are someone with experience in writing, to be able to continuously make me want more. Good luck!

TheEternalWanderer
TheEternalWandererLv4TheEternalWanderer

I am the wheel of my bumper... Steel is my body, diesel is my blood... I have sented over a thousand reincarnators... Unknown to trains, nor known to bikes... Have withstood pain to create many deaths... Yet, those wheels will crush nothing... So, as I run over, Unlimited Truck Works ~!

Safa7
Safa7Lv1Safa7

A sweet novel that deserves to waste my time, but oh animal, it is necessary to stop it and re-adjust it from the beginning and the new. I currently consider it a fall, my stupid brother😓😓😓😓

ImmortalXuanWu
ImmortalXuanWuLv13ImmortalXuanWu

This is a great novel, one of my favourites for sure. Sadly I can't give more stars on the updating stability xD, the author updates so much that you will need a LOT of fast passes to keep up with the updates

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YoPolk
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I have to say it's really awesome to read. Everytime I read a chapter it's getting more badass. So I can just advise go and give it a shot because it's one of the best Novels I read here so far.

Zeroland_Guide
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Cool going to go for it as always needed to run through all the plot to decide the run so hope it's a good run all the way..by the way thanks..

nicely_put
nicely_putLv3nicely_put

Great!intriguing!thoroughly enjoyable! Also I have a question, is the game world a projection of the world kaiden's clan hails from ? And will the game continue even when kaiden leaves earth?

ImmortalXuanWu
ImmortalXuanWuLv13ImmortalXuanWu

I'm loving this novel so far, I hope more people can come and read this awesome novel, keep up the good work syphiinz!!! I will not say much about this novel, but you can think of it like an of video game with special background, bloodlines and other plane superpowers ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Melkyal
MelkyalLv14Melkyal

A good novel with good potencial. The MC is really OP and he isn't a d*ck. The harem is pretty good, a bit to large for my taste though. The main team and the guild, although there is room for improvement, its not bad, they're funny. The worldbuilding is quite interesting and there are misterys in the background yet to be discovered. The R18 scenes are 10/10 the best of the novel.

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