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Fallen Guardian : The last Shadow

Autor: Deep_Diver
Fantasy
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What is Fallen Guardian : The last Shadow

Lesen Sie den Roman Fallen Guardian : The last Shadow des Autors Deep_Diver, veröffentlicht auf WebNovel."I will make sure that they can't follow you. Run as fast and far as you can, don't look back and brace for impact when you hear it.. ""You see...the problem is, I don't go back on my words." He said ...

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"I will make sure that they can't follow you. Run as fast and far as you can, don't look back and brace for impact when you hear it.. " "You see...the problem is, I don't go back on my words." He said in a high pitched tone, only god knows who he was speaking to. He lifted his sword and started striking the space in front of him fiercely, every strike left a glowing scar in the space around him. One could say that he was dancing with his sword. But it was a dance that courted death. "Now go back to sleep ARNUS EDIOS..!!!" The scars in the space around him reformed into a dark energy circle. It was an energy circle that no would dare to summon. He knew he would almost certainly die, but he had to do what had to be done, fulfil his vows. "Take my Sword and if it isn't enough take my life..." He said without an inch of concern for his life. He mustered all his energy one last time, every nook of his energy. He recalled everything that happened in his life. "Shadow Blood Seal...!!!" He released all his energy into the seal in one instance. The seal sucked in all the energy in an instant and there lasted a moment of peace in the air. The seal released enormous amount of dark energy that covered a great radius around it, even a Rank-S Protector would tremble in such a sight. It sucked in everything living which used darkness to live around it, sealing one of the seven demon kings, Second DEMON KING - ARNUS EDIOS and his army back in the underworld. A great crowd braced for impact as The Shadow, One of the Seven Guardians has instructed them to, every single person knelt in his honour, assuming that he was no more...But was he really no more..

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Deep_Diver
Deep_DiverAutorDeep_Diver

Writing a review of my own story and giving a 4.8 score....I am embarrassed to death.... But nevertheless, the story setting is pretty much easy to grasp....peace and balance was forged by the guardians and the first king a long time ago. But the sudden return of Demon Kings left the king and the guardians defeated.....with only three guardians left, who knows what will happen to the world.

5yr

Reitachi
ReitachiLv5Reitachi

Well.. Kinda boring with the typical writing out there gonna try something new .. Maybe this is my answer.. From the hipotesis its looking good with prolog like that and maybe we'll meet some surprise in this novel..

5yr
ReyZKim
ReyZKimLv5ReyZKim

Great story so far, its one of the best story i've read here in qidian so please continue on the update because it really lack chapters. Can't say anything other than its great so... its great.. its great.. its great.. its great.. its great.. its great... its great... its great...

5yr
Kerail
KerailLv12Kerail

Review at ch 26. I started to read beckause I liked the cover pic and I am glad to tell that the cover suits the story. As of now the main story has not started jet. Mc has been introduced and he is dark and gloomy hero. As of now the world situation is slowly explained. If all goes well the mc is tragick hero whose emotions we can imers ourselves as readers. I am hopful for the novel right now. World backround as of now seems bit ***** and black and white. But at some novels its good thing. Not certan in here jet.

5yr
Smilyfacething
SmilyfacethingLv5Smilyfacething

A overall really worthwhile, addictive read, it has really fascinating characters and a interesting background, and world. Plus the grammar is good, which is the problem with some other writers. I really enjoyed reading this, keep up the good work!

5yr
Ryokuchade
RyokuchadeLv11Ryokuchade

The story is very unique and captivating. It pulls you in and leaves you wondering what will happen next. It is a little predictable but moderately so. The writing quality is very good and not *******ish, I can follow the story well. The updating is a little slow for me but that is the norm for this kind of novel. The character design is pretty good for the chapters that have been released so far and the plot is well thought out. This is a novel I recommend to any who like martial arts or any kind of magic. I can’t wait for more chapters to be released. Keep working hard!

5yr
Sara_d
Sara_dLv2Sara_d

I honestly think tat this is one of the best stories i hv read so far . Everything is well thought and designed and never felt dull and it is well fleshed out. I constantly wait and there are many people out there like me. Updating speed is really good like 2 stories a day and which is enough for me to cope with . It slowly builds up and doesn’t just throw up bunch of information at once . The build up of world is decent and explains clearly all places which gives u more interest . The characters are well designed and every character has a major role to play even where they are just playing for minutes in the scene . It got a decent pace and persistent and have seen little to errors concerning grammatical or punctuation which helps the readers to easily understand . Eagerly waiting how the story ends up....

5yr
WanderingQi
WanderingQiLv4WanderingQi

Interesting story with potential. However, I would recommend more details to help with the world building. The majority of the content is dialog and it would help to have some non-dialog to describe a clearer picture of the interactions between characters. Keep up the good work author!

5yr
Passenger99
Passenger99Lv3Passenger99

Story is very interesting and captivating . Couldn't believe that this is your first story. I could see this reaching great heights in the near future. Waiting for the next chapter.

5yr
tomaz
tomazLv5tomaz

Spoiler enthüllen

5yr
SunnyB
SunnyBLv5SunnyB

The story is good in general. The characters are intriguing, the plot is interesting, and the world building is pretty good. Despite this, there are a few flaws. Firstly, there doesn't seem to be much progression in the story. What are the main character's goals? What is he striving for? If there is no story development, there might as well be no story. The grammar also needs some work, I would recommend grammarly. As it is right now, it's readable but not great. I would also caution against using to many ellipses. One or two a chapter is okay, but 23 per chapter is not, especially with relatively short chapters. They are used to add dramatic effect, but if you overuse them then they lose that effect. An apt comparison would be like how capitalized letters are used for emphasis, but if I capitalize ToO much, then it loSes its meaning. At this POINT, rather tHAn adding draMATIC effect, it's just Being annOying. Things lIKe this SHOUld be used spArinGly. On an aVERage book, you Would see AT most one or two eLlipSEs per page, and UsuAlly one every FEw paGes. Don't just throw them wherever you want the way I'm doing it with capitals. By doing that, you ruin the effect of adding dramatic emphasis by using it too much. Also, when you do use it it should always be with three dots, like so ... Any more doesn't mean a longer pause, it means that it's wrong. It may not be a huge deal, but it's the equivalent of doing this when someone speaks: ""Hello.' Not completely wrong, still recognizable, but just annoying, like an itch you can't scratch. This is why you don't usually see stories with bad grammar really high on the power rankings. Bad grammar is like a small itch, sure you can ignore it if the story is good, but between two equally good stories, one with good grammar and the other with bad grammar, why make yourself suffer?

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ShaNnia
ShaNniaLv1ShaNnia

Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.

3yr
Kirbyisgreen
KirbyisgreenLv4Kirbyisgreen

Good starting effort. Keep up the good work man. I look forward to reading and supporting a fellow budding author! Lets work on our art together!

4yr
Crainium9
Crainium9Lv11Crainium9

I like how you writ the story and all but your way of telling what is happening doesn’t seem to I don’t know capture it all and it seems like you are leading up to a tragic end

5yr

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