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Evil Is Death System

Autor: Her_Shadow
Martial Arts
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A paralyzed boy that was tortured his entire life suddenly finds that on his eighteenth birthday he's able to move. He grew up in the Verdant Gloria Sect which was known for how well it treated its pupils to the outside world. However, Ban, the tortured soul, was well aware that they were a bunch of cut, throat murderers that found little boys only to drain them of their life force until the day they died. They murdered for many reasons, but mostly for sheer sport. They found kids like Ban and promised them the treasures of the sect only to lock them in their bodies until they were twenty and ready to be sacrificed. When Ban wakes up, that is where the story starts. He finds out the secret behind the ritual in the Verdant Gloria Sect and has to decide whether to continue the ritual or take out his vengeance on the world. Warning: Gore, Evil Main Character, and horrible situations

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Limebell
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The plot is unique, however, the way that the plot escalates and changes is quite difficult to understand, and there is a lot of narrating, lacking character interactions between the people in this story. Interactions only began in the third chapter, but I believe that this story will only get better as it continues to flow. Good Luck writing! 👍

don_offl
don_offlLv3don_offl

since there are no more than three chapters I was unable to get hooked to the story but I'm sure it'll be very engaging to read after more chapters are released I couldn't find any drawbacks other than some need for punctuation marks here and there. With more chapters this novel can be a great one, I congratulate the author and wish him good luck this is a request to the author as a reader:- pls don't make the mc too much evil to the point he even kill the people tried to help him it makes his revenge against his enemies contradict

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