Dreams of Cultivated Wisdom

This is a good one. The writing quality is good, and there are only a little grammatical errors. The story concept is very unique, very innovative. My only issue with this is that the story seems extremely slow paced. There is not a lot of excitement in these initial chapters. There is also a lot of detail without action to even it out. If you can resolve this, the this book would be fire. I'm excited to see what you can do with this book....

A very innovative plot and story, and one thing I like is the build-up. We read a few chapters that build up the MC before the actual story begins, and it really helps me understand what kind of character this is.

The writing is very crisp and well sturctured though I must sayin 3 chapters there isn't much story. Mainly the building up of the MC and a bit of lore here and there. Hopefully within 2 to 3 chapters we start to see some actual plot or at least some struggle or conflict even if it personal. May sound like a gripe but asking for more isn't its actually a good thing just gotta deliver

The story follows Liu Zhang in the cruel world of cultivation. Liu Zhang got lucky and obtained a powerful and mysterious book that allowed him to enter a dreamscape related to the historical figures in the past. The cultivation in the novels has a unique and interesting concept to it. I'll say that the novel start with a good path, however, there is still some aspect that needed to be improved such as the world-building and the characters which could be improved in the following chapters. I recommend this novel to those who like the cultivation genre and like a complex MC. I have to say that this novel has great potential.