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Beast Enchanter(ReWrite in Progress)

Autor: LycanBlood
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What is Beast Enchanter(ReWrite in Progress)

Lesen Sie den Roman Beast Enchanter(ReWrite in Progress) des Autors LycanBlood, veröffentlicht auf WebNovel.So I got my new apartment. It turned out much different than I expected. I finally got to play the game, and I honestly can't wait to go back!Disclaimer-I do not own this art it is own by Lie Setiawan...

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So I got my new apartment. It turned out much different than I expected. I finally got to play the game, and I honestly can't wait to go back! Disclaimer-I do not own this art it is own by Lie Setiawan on ArtStation if you want me to remove it, just let me know.

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LycanBlood
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I'm writing review 1 because I can :p but other then that just to mention a few things I write this book because I've wanted to write a book for a long while now but have constantly told myself otherwise. Ive told myself that it would turn out bad or I would quickly get bored but I want to prove myself wrong. I have high motivation right now so chapter will be coming out quickly but at bare minimum I hope to at least get out 1 chapter a week

Gghdffgh
GghdffghLv3Gghdffgh

Like it so far. Only 6 chapters, but promising. Quite typical gaming WN so if you like the other ones this might be something for you. The writing is not perfect, but it's mostly lack of commas and punctuation so it's not to disturbing. Which I way better than most other original novels here.

Dorof
DorofLv5Dorof

It's too early to write a review about background or development and stuff(i gave them 5 kindly), yet i can say 1 thing. The grammar is unbearable. Physically hurts me to see all the errors, mispelled words(even in school, the misspelled words aren't that big of a deal until the mistake doesnt create a new word, with different meaning. Yours usually do. ), 0 sense sentences, absolute chaos in past sentences and other stuff... I am sorry mr. Author but i won't read this story till u edit it.... And you can't say i am mean, because i gave you a 4,2 blindly.

MrZeo
MrZeoLv14MrZeo

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TheSoundOfSilence
TheSoundOfSilenceLv11TheSoundOfSilence

Although there are a few contradictions in the background building, it's still a good story, that's got good potential. I hope author can make it a serious and durable project qith the help of editor-sensei. ** : I support the book

juliet_doyog
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AngelsCreed
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Grammar is rough is some patches but overall enticing beginning. I got insta hooked and will keep this story in my library. I recommend trying it out especially if you like reincarnation of the strongest sword ______ (forgot the title either god or emperor). Either way op mc with op abilities. Can't wait for future chapters

CrazyPerson12
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Saarlink
SaarlinkLv5Saarlink

It is still early days but this is a good but fairly cliche story so far. The most obvious issue is the desperate need of an editor. Not just for grammar/spelling assistance but also to help cut out unneeded duplication. For example, we don't need to see the character screen that many times when literally nothing has changed.

DrunkenVeins
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HolyChild
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Masterdino
MasterdinoLv15Masterdino

The novel is good. The sentence structure could use some fixing. Too many run on sentences and some periods or commas could help. Grammar could also use a little tweaking. Author just has to make sure that he goes over what he writes or just use grammarly.

Sevennamed
SevennamedLv12Sevennamed

I really enjoy this novel unfortunately the updates are extremely slow if there were more updates I would love it even more. 😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥

Alex0Mac
Alex0MacLv11Alex0Mac

This is pretty good so far. There are a few things that should be fixed like; you don’t need to write out ALL the stats some is fine, the interactions between people do not seem natural and the characters have not really been described so it’s hard to picture what they look like. The characters should really be described better, I usually see some sort of movie in my head of what is going on but in this book that doesn’t really happen.

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KoalaTreeHugger
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Good story but needs some editing. It's hard to read but still doable. I love the story though. Hope to read more of it ☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺

coop3000
coop3000Lv15coop3000

This book has a lot of promise I hope to see the character grow and to see this world that the writer has started to create expand at the moment still waiting for this book to get more chapters

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