A Vampire Knight's Destiny

I love vampire stories, this is the first vampire book I read here. Good job, keep up the good work 👍🌟

The story is really interesting and is well developed, besides I'd like even more description of some of the major characters but you do pretty good with that too. And occasionally there's some grammar issues but nothing to really care that much about. I really think the world development is too notch though

Eh this is my second vampire book I'm reading and the first vampire book I read is way better than this one but this book is nice I have only read one chapter but I had to stop reading to leave this review because the book is so understandable and beautiful. Nice work

The story's intriguing enough to make you want to scroll down to the next chapter and read more 👍 Writing quality is fairly good. Although I have a few suggestions, like trying to use a different way of describing sound effects instead of just writing the sound itself (like the "Whoosh" "Whoosh" part in the 1st chapter). Also, I like the book cover. It's captivating. But, the placement and size of the texts need some improvement. I recommend making the book title larger and placing them below so that the readers will immediately see it. Overall, this novel is still a good read, and I would highly recommend it 👍

This is a fun read! I'm about 4 chapters in so far and I've already added to my collection. It's a system novel that plays a little to the usual system tropes, but it adds enough of its own likeness to it that it stands out from the usual crowd of system series! Definitely worth a read. :) Great job so far!

Nice book💜💜The beginning chapters are okay but try updating.

While reading the synopsis, it feels like it already told me what's the ending and what's going to happen. The first paragraphs where great, but it suddenly changed in the last part, so I felt bombarded with different kinds of information although it did pique my interest. The way the author described the scenes in so much detail is *chef's kiss*, but it gets quite lengthy, especially describing a character. Overall, this is a good vampire novel.

I have great vampire novels and I must say, this is one of them

man i love the dialogue in this story actually captivating story moves in a great pace 5/5 only thing i would mention is expanding on a few spots i mention it in the chapter comments. i thought it felt a bit rushed but besides that legit a great read. when do you upload your chapters ? i add it it in my collection i think it has a lot of potential.

It is a very interesting story, the author knows how to describe the scenes. At least for now, I liked the first chapters and I think it has potential.

The plot is interesting .I like the suspense !I had questions in my head from the first chapter, what is his father ? , where is Chase going ? , etc. To not forget the nice descriptions ! I am very much in love with the book , although I am not a fan of system novels.

This book is my pick. A man growing from light as he struggles in his own darkness, like this plots. We will be dragged in this book if you opened it's first page, so make an open space and read this book well. the writing style is awesome and the plot is marvelous Keep up the great work