SAND MAGE OF THE BURNT DESERT

This is so awesome I love the plot and how the mc had large limitations on his power and is growing after every fight this what you would wanna see in a great novel.

Great story. Love the main character, saw a comment somewhere that MC was basicly useless the first 50-60 chapters. Did not find this to be the case, started off as weak but with a well written personality. He also gets quite usefull pretty quickly, and the first 50 ish chapters is basicly a training arc supported by a fantastic "mentor" character. Mc's personallity develops throughout the story in a good way, and he remains an exiting character. The other supporting characters are also interesting. Creative and exiting setting gor the story. Some incositensy with name spelling in later chapters.

Hello! I really enjoyed your story; the imagery was so strong that I could picture it in panels as I read. I’m a commission-based comic/webtoon artist, and if you ever want to turn some scenes into a comic, I’d be excited to bring them to life visually. You’re always welcome to view my work on Instagram (eve_verse_) or add me on Discord (bennett_lol) if you'd like to know more. Whenever you reach out on Discord or Instagram, including a screenshot of this conversation will help me identify you quickly.