Acquisition - Season 1 - Chapter 19 (21)

So there is a big thing I wanted to address before hand, I've gotten 2 reviews, which I'm happy for but I wanted to go over and see how everyone else feels since I am trying to grow as a writer.

1st, Change the MC's name from Y/n L/n to something else, this review was actually why I gave the MC a name and then changed it again when others didn't like it, currently Y/n Neo Sekai.

2nd, this review goes over again the name despite already being changed but also brings up another point, the MC is boring with no actual flaws or personality. Now I won't say I fleshed the MC out perfectly because I'm still learning but I don't agree with no flaws or personality to certain extents.

The MC when it comes to flaws is a bit weird. When it comes to learning things the MC has not only been training for years but also has access to info he shouldn't have, though I don't know exactly what they mean when they say flaws so I'm assuming in skill.

Also when it comes to no personality I would like to apologize(?) for not having the MC at every twist and turn just say what he is feeling. I made it clear early on that the MC is reserved and walled off but slowly has let his wall down especially with the two Setsuna scenes both her hug with how he reacted and her noticing him chuckling instead of being stoic. I'm not just gonna make the MC a 2d character who states all he is feeling and actively have him chasing women because he is a harem protag. I've also gone over his care for the younger kids, his internal struggles in Chapter 5.5, and how he reacted when Midnight used her quirk on him.

If any of you feel like the MC has problems that you don't like please let me know I want to get better, possibly leave a review, a proper review on my Webnovel side.

(Not saying the ones I have aren't proper just saying to not give it a 5/5 just because I asked)

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MC POV

Despite attempting to convince myself that I no longer have a choice I can't help but feel a horrible feeling down my back, maybe I should've alerted the school a bit better, though I do have my security measure I still could've made better choices.

I prepared myself a lot but being here, being so close to death is still something I wasn't prepared for.

"You ok", I hear a whisper from my left side noticing Setsuna nudging me.

"Y-yeah, did you need something", I quickly take 2 deep breaths before exhaling.

(The better version for calming yourself quick)

"You looked like you were out of it, are you really that nervous, and here I thought you were gong to be a knight who saved all", hearing her words my right hand holding my spear tightens, though I hide it.

I lean back bit meeting my other two spears acting as supports.

"Nah, I'm fine just thinking about how I'm probably gonna have to rescue you", I do my best to hide my nervousness, a skill I picked up on having to constantly lie throughout my childhood.

"What's that supposed to mean", she elbows me in my side giving me a joke pout.

"-despite looking like we have a stable society, all it takes for one uncontrol able quirk for people to die. Aizawa taught you your limits, All Might taught you how to handle danger and combat, now I will teach your a new perspective how to save lives!", hearing the last part of her speech I can only assume everyone is probably thinking of what happened on that day.

"I hope you all leave here with a better understanding of what it means to save others", she gives a little bow as some people clap.

"He is awesome", Uraraka is clapping the loudest

(For those who don't remember Uraraka thinks Thirteen is a guy like most do)

Aizawa who was leaning on a railing takes a glance towards the center fountain, though I can't see it from where I'm standing.

Standing up I see them all, dozens if not hundreds of criminals and villains pouring out of a fog gate, that feeling come back.

"HUDDLE UP AND DON'T MOVE, THIRTEEN PROTECT THE STUDENTS!", Aizawa shouts putting his goggles one and jumping over the railing.

"Wow they got real-", I place my hand on Kirishima's shoulder.

"Sorry but I don't think-"

"THESE ARE REAL VILLAINS SO STAY BACK", Aizawa quickly starts dashing down the steps.

"Where is she? They said she would be here, I'm curious if we kill some of her students will she come?", a scratchy voice can be heard sending shivers down everyone's spine as I lift one of my spear preparing myself.

"Teacher Thirteen, shouldn't there be sensors?", Momo's voice comes out frantic.

"Yes there should be"

"Are they only at the main building? Even then I can't hear them chances are they've got a jamming quirk", Todoroki quickly takes his place in front watching all the villains.

"Kaminari can you check", I place my hand on his shoulder as he nods"

"Yeah I can do that", he quickly starts getting to work.

(Btw unlike in canon Aizawa did immediately rush down, he has seen one disaster before so not again)

We watch as Aizawa quickly dispatches a lot of the villains, I quickly draw both of my guns and start firing from range doing my best to assist.

"Mr. Sekai please refrain from interfering", Thirteen quickly comes to my side attempting to stop me from drawing to much attention from their ranges combatants.

"We need to evacuate now", Thirteen pulls my gun down as she starts pulling me away.

"Sorry but I can not allow that", a wispy like voice comes from exit/entrance, a man in a suit with a silver neck bracer and 'wispy skin' stares indifferently at us.

"Greetings we are the League of Villains, forgive our audacity to interrupt today but we've come to the fortress that is U.A. to kill the Symbol of Peace, though we were under the impression she would be here, it seems she had a change of schedule, though my role shall remain unchanged", the smoky figure uncaring of our shock sends out a black mist covering us all though not before I manage to use my quirk to launch myself away.

I attempt to grab at Setsuna with my quirk but the wisp blocks it and sends my energy elsewhere.

"I see a strong one", the smoke sends out more of his quirk at me as I quickly dodge it chucking my spear at him before pulling in my other one.

Side stepping it he stares at me, "you are far to young to be-", stopping him the back end of a spear slams into his head as he falls to the floor.

I quickly make my way towards the figure before slamming my fist into his head to make sure he stays down before making sure my guns are reloaded and making my way down towards Aizawa.

'My classmates have got this, after all the biggest threat is here', despite attempting to reassure myself I feel worried, why?

Moving towards the ledge I start firing down my bullets while doing my best to control one of my spears to assist Aizawa.

Aizawa immediately looks at me really annoyed but there isn't much complaining he can do.

From behind him an enhancer type quirk user attempts to hit him before a spear collides with his head as Aizawa grabs my spear and uses it to twist himself around.

I opt to calling one of my other spears and letting him use that one.

"NO NO NO, Kurogiri said he would take care of all the students, did this Mob take care of him? That's cheating!", Handy starts scratching his neck while staring intensely at me.

He stares up at the black bird that despite having been docile is only glaring at me.

"Do you dislike him Nomu, fine he is a nuisance anyway go and take care of him", quickly the bird blitz's out his animal instinct taking control.

I feel a large spike go through my back as I manage to use my quirk to barely dodge an attack from the bird man.

"Shit!", before I can fully react a fist slams into my half-spear guarded chest.

Flying across the room I manage to barely recover my footing.

Another fist flies towards my face as I activate my 「 Gravity Armor 」as well as lightening my own weight.

Barely dodging the second blow I use my quirk fly above him as I place my spear on his skill

「100x Gravity」, my body immediately crashes on top of his as the spear enters his head, on pure natural instinct he grabs my torso slowly crushing it in his hand.

Managing to get a good hold he manages to crush a couple ribs well regenerating.

「'All-mighty Push!'」

Managing to push his hands away I create a bit of distance before coughing up some blood and holding my stomach.

'Shit! I didn't think this thing was that strong, his main trait is his Shock Absorption isn't it? Sure he has high strength but that was against a suppressed All Might who didn't use their strongest move'

Before I can react a fist collides with my head as another three blows slam against me the blood loss slowly getting to me.

I barely escape his blows with my armor and head towards the sky, placing my spear under me, I decrease its gravity and give it repulsion energy allowing it to keep me afloat.

'FUCK!', I put my hand to my chest using my quirk to realign some of my broken bones.

As I stare downwards I notice the bird is staring at me as his hand is stretching through black smoke.

A hand grasps my head as I'm pulled through and dealt a bunch of blows, slowly but surely pummeled into the floor over and over again.

'There's no way this is it? I don't wanna die... Please I don't wanna die'

Slowly tears fly out of my eyes as each blow makes me cough blood.

I can't die I've gotta protect...

As I sit there my bloodied body on the floor barely alive I look into my mind.

'Who... Who do I have to protect? Who do I have to prove my strength too?'

The entire world around me is quiet as everything is still.

'Midoriya? No, he knows my strength and he has his own... Fuyumi? Maybe... But is that enough will I die having done nothing, never finding out anything... Dying so alone...

My mind slowly goes blank, though before darkness takes over my mind a single smile is all I can think off... Oh.... So it's her I have to prove.... Is this what they call admiration... care.... Love?

That night years ago was no longer my last... and I doubt this will be either.

<Acquisition at 100%>

<Beginning System Link>

{System Link Complete, Singularity System Fully Acquired}

{User is in a critical state, due the users past accomplishments the System will use it's Authority to give an early reward for Continuous Quest Completion: A Ripple in Time to acquire skill {The Tainted Sorrow: Corruption} due to this skill being Unique and wielded by Chuuya Nakahara it will be altered to match the user}

{Skill: Acquired Tainted Corruption acquired}

{Skill: Tainted Corruption is being forcefully activated by System}

{"Good Luck"}

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Apologize if the fight was too fast but that's how things are when an opponent is vastly stronger, it was to prove the strength difference in this stronger world.

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