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He is Monkey D. Luffy, but not the original Monkey D. Luffy, because in this world, that one is Lucy, his blood sister, while he had a peaceful childhood with his other three brothers. They all ended up following different paths since he didn’t have his memories. It was only when he entered a barrel lost at sea to save himself that he finally began to regain all the knowledge he had of this world from his past life. On top of that, he realized he could use this knowledge to his advantage to acquire everything he needed on his adventure. He was given four chances to summon people to start his journey, and more importantly, he finally received his two devil fruits, becoming powerful from the very beginning, with a plan that stretched to the end of his adventure. This story is the adventure of a man called Monkey D. Luffy, with the goal of becoming the emperor of all the seas in the world. For that, he will find the One Piece and destroy the World Government, for they cannot coexist. Be it the Marines, government agents, CP units, Tenryuubito, Holy Knights, Gorosei, or Im, Luffy will walk over a mountain of corpses. “I want you in my crew. Together, we will change the whole world and turn it upside down.” “Hahaha. Don’t worry, I believe in your potential, that's why I want you in my crew.” “My swordsman already fought you and lost. Now let’s see the strength of the world’s greatest swordsman too, right, Yamato? I hope you don’t mind fighting two rookies at once...?” “Awaken... Awaken my power... and destroy all your enemies...” “It’s good to see you after so long, Grandpa... and you, sister.” “Monkey D.? The most dangerous family in the world!” “Isn’t it a beautiful scene? Two Shichibukai and a Vice Admiral as my trophies! Come on, take a good picture and put it on tomorrow’s newspaper cover!” “I declare this kingdom my territory!” “Enel, you’re nothing but an idiot with a god complex. If you’re a god... then I’m a god slayer.” “As you said, Teach, people’s dreams never end! And if people’s dreams never end, why should I stop?” “Doflamingo... Jake... you’re so far from home. I hope you don’t regret this.” "You narcissistic woman, how can someone be so annoying and arrogant?" "What did you say, you damned man?!" "I now declare you husband and wife." "It's time to return to the Blue Sea, after all, we have a world to shake." "CP9? What a disappointment, Sengoku. I want money for them and Doflamingo... I want 2 billion berries at Enies Lobby in a few days." "Enies Lobby was completely destroyed...?" "I've fought Mihawk, Jimbei, Crocodile, Doflamingo, Hancock, and Moria... you're the only one left, Kuma..." "It seems we've finally met, Rayleigh..." "Let's invade Impel Down!" "I came here to find you, sister, it's time for you to join my crew... Joygirl..." "It looks like we've finally arrived at the war." "Sengoku... you tried to arm yourself to execute my brother, so I'll make an example of this Tenryuubito for the whole world." "You can't do this...!" *BANG!* "He actually did it, that bastard...." "Your chains are loose, move your ass and get out of Marineford!!" "Saturn!!! I'M GOING TO KILL YOU!!" "I couldn't kill you last time, Akainu... but I'll make sure to do it now." "Destroy the rest of Marineford." "Let's get out of here. When you return, you'll take over this country for your family, Rebecca." "No matter if we're on opposite sides... I will always love you, grandpa." "It's time to start our training." "Let's begin. Now, let's head to the New World, capture territories, and grow our fleet." "Is the entire Straw Hat fleet ready? Now let's head to Wano, after all, we have a war against two Yonkou!" -------------------------------------------- This Fanfic's Schedule for the week, updates on: Monday, Thursday, and Saturday. ----------------------------------------------
I will be publishing this chapter as a notice regarding the fact that many more people are now joining this fanfic, which surprised me. So, I want to clarify a few things since I originally created it over a year ago.
First, this was one of the first fanfics I ever wrote, so it's going to have many mistakes, especially because it was initially written in the first person. Later, I switched to third person as I found my writing style over time, so there will be some confusion at the beginning in certain parts. I didn't do a full revision, just skimmed through it, so there may be some errors, especially in the first 20 chapters.
This fanfic wasn't very serious at the beginning. In fact, I started with a soul making wishes to a Rob, plucking fruits and aspects. After all, I just wanted to experiment with creating an adventure where Luffy had different but OP powers, with important characters in his crew from the very start.
Because of this, I added characters that I liked imagining in his crew. Even though it may seem silly how he acted and convinced them, I don't intend to change that now, as I don't have time. The entire first volume needs a big overhaul, and I want to start the story with around 10 chapters of Luffy's childhood instead of those memories he acquired in the first chapter, which I had redone from the original idea.
A major right and wrong move I made in this story was discovering ChatGPT starting from the chapter where Kuina met her father in her village. I began testing the tool, guiding it to write what I wanted, and I was amazed by the details ChatGPT gave me at first, while I simply asked it to rewrite my passages with more depth. Of course, I now see this was a big mistake.
Unfortunately, I used this tool for the entire first part of the story that I had already written, since I was initially publishing this fanfic in Portuguese until chapter 96. I would simply ask ChatGPT, 'Rewrite this with more details...' So, there are some exaggerations, although I revised it a year ago and cut most of what the tool created.
But there was also a positive side that makes me not regret anything, because thanks to this tool, I was able to start translating into English. As a writer, I learned a lot while organizing everything the tool gave me. After Skypiea, I stopped using the tool and continued writing the story on my own. I believe I've become better than when I started, or at least that's what some people tell me.
I want to redo this. I want to change things in the future, but for now, I don't have the time.
Another point is that there are some decisions, like Luffy's fight against Nami. I included that fight and gave the girl the fruit for a reason. I wanted to introduce the powers of the mythical beasts, the Eikons. I would have handled it differently now, perhaps made it more reasonable to reach that fight, but I wouldn't avoid it. After all, I needed to showcase those powers that would be used much more frequently in later chapters.
Anyway, I just wanted to clarify a few things. This is a harem story. There will be +18 scenes, but the fanfic doesn't solely focus on that. Luffy is already a father during the timeskip. You might see that as a weakness, but it's natural for a man, even if he's fighting against the entire world.
Additionally, there will be even greater adventures than Luffy's original ones in some other places. It's not because he'll have Shirahoshi, Lami, Yamato, and Kuina from the beginning that he won't visit their homelands or won't be able to recruit new crew members. He may start with four easily, but at the moment, he has over 30 members in his main crew and dozens of captains in his own fleet with thousands of soldiers during the timeskip. In fact, I'm currently writing the Wano war arc, where Luffy will summon 20 captains from his fleet and thousands of soldiers and giant animals to sail to Wano against Kaido and Big Mom at the same time in a declared war.
It will be a long adventure. There are already 900,000 words written in this fanfic, and I plan to finish it with over 1,200,000, perhaps even 1,500,000 words if everything goes according to plan.
So, this was a brief notice for the beginning of this adventure. I hope you enjoy it if you can overlook the early mistakes, and I wish you a good and long journey in this adventure!
