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'The One Punch Girl' In Nine Deadly Realms

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What is 'The One Punch Girl' In Nine Deadly Realms

Lesen Sie den Roman 'The One Punch Girl' In Nine Deadly Realms des Autors squirtle_sqaud_z, veröffentlicht auf WebNovel.' The One Punch Girl' is the strongest Female super Hero ever in Female Lead. Often She finishes her opponents in one punch. She is immortal But doesn't Know that . The Earth's Immortal system has se...

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' The One Punch Girl' is the strongest Female super Hero ever in Female Lead. Often She finishes her opponents in one punch. She is immortal But doesn't Know that . The Earth's Immortal system has sent her to earth for sake of defending the World by many aliens . Despite being a busy division leader, there she will be pretend to be a student ,will be Giving tests , capturing monsters , deals with human relationships and resolving conflicts between different species. Find Out how she deals with it , from the first chapter.

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Whoa. How did this get so many votes when the story is inspired by One Punch Man and this isn't a fan fiction inspired contest? Not to mention, it has poor writing with frequent lack of proper capitalization, punctuation, and overall correct sentence structure. The mistakes are so blatantly obvious that it makes me wonder if the reviewers who gave this such high ratings are in elementary school or something. My advice would be to use Grammarly or learn how to write better basic English because this grammar is pretty bad and detracts from any semblance of a story. I would have given you a one, but you tried, so two for effort. I hope you take my advice seriously in order to improve your story and writing.

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AuroraAzure
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Umm.. I'm only here because the author commented to me on IRAS randomly to check out their novel. It was out of the blue since it was off of a balloon gift comment of mine, but I was curious and checked it out anyway. But the writing is just okay for me? I'm not into anime and I can't follow the story well because I think the formatting got messed up? Oh well you told me to check it out so I did. Good luck with your story I suppose? 😅 Sorry I can't give more feedback because I can't follow the story that well, and it's only 4 chapters long...... Guerilla advertising on translated novels is probably not a good idea haha. I was surprised by the reply. 😆

julis
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Sorry but I expected better from a story voted third in the contest. Writing mistakes are all over the place. It doesn't even look like it's being seriously written because sentences are cut off before the end and appear on another paragraph. Grammar is completely off. That just shows lack of care for properly typing and reviewing your work before uploading. There are other stories which at least proofread their work better than this. The story is also based off one punch man, so it's not really original like the other stories too. This is just my honest opinion. If I were to give you a real score on what this story deserves, it would be a 1-2 star max, no offense. Keep writing and studying proper English to get better. But I have a feeling that once this contest is over, you're just going to drop this story like many others who just join the contest for the SS prize. But I hope you do continue so that you can get better.

RedNight
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I am giving you four to encourage you, and this rating in no way reflects on the story itself. If you want me to give you a honest rating, it would be one, and this one rating is due to your desire to write. Write more, learn more, from a fellow author who started at the bottom just like you.

Kalindi_Dalvi_8389
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Amazing writting quality almost no spelling mistakes Stability of updating is also good enough for 5 stars And story development is better than first chapter and The mc's development was very nice. And world background was awesome👏✊👍👏✊👍 pretty awesome book.

squirtle_sqaud_z
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The one punch girl series is best and her immense power is very important and also she is female lead so The one punch girl series is best and her immense power is very important and also she is female lead so

kkiyumno
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I saw the author comment on many novels to check out his novel, so I did. The grammar made the novel so hard to read that I could barely understand anything. Also, the idea of combining multiple different animes and stories doesn’t sit well with me. The contest is not fan fiction. Many supporters say that the grammar mistakes are a unique ‘style’, but I think they’re just mistakes. I would suggest proofreading your chapters more, checking grammar, and ensuring that it’s easier to understand what’s happening and more detail.

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Kavita_Tawde
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Amazing and best story written by him must read must read !! Amazing and best story written by him must read must read !! Amazing and best story written by him must read must read !! Amazing and best story written by him must read must read !!

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terminerfers_TM
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You should try my novel one punch girl you will love it You should try my novel one punch girl you will love it You should try my novel one punch girl you will love it

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Vijay_Tawde
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!!!! I am speechless !!!!Amazing it's super super super amazing I like one punch girl series very much and world background also good nothing more to say but I will contribute to make it win the contest

vaman_dalvi
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Really awesome must try very nice that's all dabura is my favorite Really awesome must try very nice that's all dabura is my favorite Really awesome must try very nice that's all dabura is my favorite

MarcoDao
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It's not bad of a story, the author has a lot of chapters written which is very commendable I believe. The major issue I have though is that there's not much in the way of decent sentence construction or punctuation making the reading experience very messy. I'm sure English is not the author's first language so I'd recommend him to get someone to help him edit before publishing. Other than that: your premise is good, but it relies too much on me knowing comic books and Anime references of which I only know about half of those things. I'd suggest that you make an original character/villain or two and maybe explain how all the universes appeared in this earth (unless I missed a chapter or two then don't worry about this). Otherwise yeah

Bittu_Dada
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Amazingly awesome its dope bro most savage book ever read its very nice all since the prolouge to all the chaps ahead must have 5 stars and also support of power stone you should also give him piwer stone trust me its worth it......

Kshitij_Tawde
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Amazing must read Amazing must read Amazing must read Amazing must read Amazing must read Amazing must read Amazing must read Amazing must read

Rutuja_Tawde
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Awesome must read and update Speed very much high must take rest Awesome must read and update Speed very much highmust take rest Awesome must read and update Speed very much highmust take rest

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