Veleries
the art is beautiful. it's a bit confusing with all the flashback at first. I really wanted the story get the hell straight to the damn point, so many secrets and all, but i guess that what made this story interesting and people yearn to read more. if someone is not patient enough, might as well drop this.
First thing that got me hooked was the art and its softness. It does makes me think someone is telling the story from a distant past and it's fitting for a magical realm too. I can't figure out whose art it reminds me of, but I really love the style. The story is quite interesting and has more of a serious tone. There are a lot of questions at the beginning and clues are dropped in slowly as the story progresses so the author has a lot on their hands to work with. I'm looking forward to how things will unfold in the next chapters.
It is a good story. It takes a long time to get off the ground though. The setup is pretty long. You dont even see the academy without paying so far. It is good. Dont geg me wrong. The art is high quality. The story is great. The only problem is the rate of the stories progression. It has a lot of filler. 12 in and the school dosent show up. It was very frustrating to read so much and not see the main part of the story so far. Personally i dont pay money for chapters so i dont know when the school shows up but i think it should have appeared far sooner. I wouldve had the prologue to the school be maybe 5 chapters. That is more than enough to show the characters and there personalities While still having enough room for story and an explanation for how hi e ends up in the academy. It moves at a snails pace so you give up pretty fast. It really misses in that area but i dont hate it. I just think it has too much filler and not enough story progression. Its still good though.
When I first started reading this book I was just so happy and then came so plot twist and with ever sentience brought me closer and closer to the edge of my seat leaving me beging for more and I can't wait for even more chapter this is by far one of the best things 8 have read on this app.β€β€πππ. can't wait for more.