Mymylove06
I really like the opening to the story. The whispers, meeting MC, the abandon building😱(I don’t want to say much more because then it’s a spoiler😁). The plot is very well thought out. I would like to suggest some editing and proofreading, but other than that it was a good story. My hat is tipped to you Author😊
Okay new readers, please give this novel a chance 🙏. The author will surely surprise you in many ways. Okay, review proper, this novel has good execution of the concept and the dialogues were also good. Very lifelike and realistic for me. Not everyone can pull it off so easily. It was like butter being sliced by a knife. Characters were fleshed out and so far, so good! Kudos and good luck! It was an amazing experience for my part and wished for other readers to share my experience too! haha 😂 Gracias!
There's an interesting mystery here that implies a lot more to come. The characters are quite likable and I like the tone which they're speaking with. If I could give some writing advice, I'd like more descriptions of settings and characters. I'd like a stronger idea of visuals, possibly through character sensory of the environment.