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So far one of the longest prologue books ever I mean they still haven't even got to the storyline yet it's all the stuff that characters are doing before the story started 20 chapters of prologue so far good writing though and I like the concept if it actually updated more regularly I can find out whether the story is very good or not
*This review is based on the first 5 chapters* Constructive Criticism: I suggest that you get an editor, there is many errors in your grammar in chapter(s) 1(-2). I am bad at such myself or I’d help out. Also I can’t see enough of whether this is going to be a good story off the first 5 chaps, I really like to have more story by this point. Positive Feedback: Good character build up and a nice story Idea. Keep up the good notes of what you are doing.;,;. Personal Feedback: I will continue this at another time to see whether I like this book or not, as I said, the first 5 chaps aren’t enough. However, If why I am keeping this in my library turns out to be true, I will really enjoy this novel, while if not, than I doubt that I will stick around past chapter 20. Now please don’t let what people say (including myself) stop you from finishing what you started.;,;.