The plot of the story reminds me of WORLD WAR Z, but instead of Brad Pitt we have Emma. The MC's motivation is as solid as ever and the stakes grow from the first chapter. The story really actually forces you to imagine what a contagious pandemic would be capable of and the pressure of finding your child in such an environment. the flow of the story is good. its still young but it has great potential.. keep it up author
A very nice story I must commend. There is a lot of narrative than dialogue, though. You could work on your tenses more and read through the work and solve some wrongly spelled words and grammatical errors. The story has a hint of fast pace that we drive the survival game with suspense. If you could add these elements, then the story will be nothing short of perfection.
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