Yang_Studio
I thought I'll just read the first ten chapters or so but I just couldn't stop myself once I started. Your novel was that good. Appreciative. From the plot, the writing quality to world background all was really nicely set. Yes there were a few glitches but not as much as to hinder the process of reading. The character design, according to my personal opinion, needs a little polishing. Overall it deserves my attention and I'm happily reviewing it while keeping it in my library. Keep it up author.
This is the first fantasy novel I read in Webnovel and it's certainly an eye-opener. At the time of writing, I have read 15 chapters and I'm still wondering what's happening - not in a bad way. I just mean that I'm wondering what the future holds for the girl - the main character. The plot is slowly unfolding. Writing Quality: It's great and any mistakes are negligible to me.
What must a woman do to show her worth. Don’t judge a book by it’s cover..this bookworm is evolving very fast. I love the story and it's pace. I am waiting how them story is going to continue and the development of feelings between the main lead. The only thing that bothers me is the author's love for submission and its excessive description in the story.
Discovered the story today and read 18 chapters.. Even though the story is interesting it lacks in typo & grammar mistakes.. It can be eventually corrected in the future and all the best for your work for the rest of the story dear author. I think you should clearly mention in the synopsis that it is very much unsuitable for kids.