Springtofu
The storyโs great. The writing also improves along the way, or rather it takes shape? At first, the way it was written was as if looking at a dream, somewhat hazy. But it starts to sort of clear up? Well, other than that, there are some grammatical errors and it almost seems as if itโs being typed on a phone with auto correct on. You might want to read it through and check for errors before posting.
One of my favourite novel .. always eagerly waiting for the update n love the characters n the sort of story plot it's amazing.. no Melo drama r related things are happening ... It literally hook up the readers to look forward with positive response n feedbacks... Love u loadssssssss dear author springtofu๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
The story is interesting. I like the quotes in the beginning of chapters. The author is eventually improving from the grammatical errors but still it's good. I look forward to more updates because people lose interest if the updates are slow. More power to the author for updating chapters along with managing studies.
Hi author... i, going to read this it has a nice and smooth start even in the synopsis... nice way of writing this even it is a bit lack but i bet this will be popular very soon... thanks for creating this novel... we readers are greatful that you create something like this...๐๐๐. ๐. I support this novel... gook luck author-san.... *fighting....๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
The story is evolving nicely. There are some grammar errors but that's should be normal because the author is always trying to please us by giving us more updates. These are actually some words to the author : your story is amazing and just one of the best works of art I have ever read. Also don't rush, take your time on chapters. I am not saying this in a negative way. What I want to say is you don't need to rush chapters. Continue this beautiful story๐๐
The story is going great but ending it hanging is not soo very nice and polite. I hope the author will finish it properly. Coz if not chances are all your stories will just be the same nice flowing and ending them abruptly as if in a rush without proper ending just to say THE STORY ENDS. Why u will start a new story if u have rushed this one.better think of a proper ending and finish it before focusing on new story.