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You Are Mine

mockingbird81

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Read You Are Mine novel written by the author mockingbird81 on Webnovel, This serial novel genre is Romance stories, ✓ Newest updated ✓ All rights reserved

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Joseph was her ultimate love and she is willing to do everything for him to love her back. However, he sent her away and broke her heart. Her reputation was ruined and Joseph did not give her a chance. Now that he's back and offering a bright future for her, will she give in?

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I_love_u_3000
I_love_u_3000Lv4I_love_u_3000

I'm reading this story.. and I'm already addicted by it... Please more update.. story is veeeeeeerrrrrryyy interesting.. I'm loving it very much.. I will support you.. promise...

R123
R123Lv5R123

The story is so interesting..I hope that the author won't drop it because I can't wait to know the rest of its plot and the truth about his mother obsession...

Spread_your_wings
Spread_your_wingsLv6Spread_your_wings

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R123
R123Lv5R123

......The story of the novel and its plot is so amazing and interesting.......It's the first time for me to read this type of story about an obsessed mother and her thoughts about her son and her plans to get rid of any girl around him even if it's her daughter but I think it's the reason why this novel took much attention from us .......and wow I am waiting for the updates......please don't be late

Spread_your_wings
Spread_your_wingsLv6Spread_your_wings

A brilliant story taken up equally beautifully!! The characters, plot, situations everything is drawn out in such a mesmerizing way ..only drawback is that there is a equally powerful back story in between the past and the present that the female protagonist is not aware of at all... N as a reader even we are given a vague idea of it...which makes the story per chapter very confusing what was in past, what is in present...so only sturdy and early updates can handle it

midnight_bloom
midnight_bloomLv5midnight_bloom

The story has potential. I find the pace a bit fast, I guess, but definitely, the plot is interesting. But please, please check the grammar and spelling because even at the first chapter, it has lots of typos already. Nevertheless, it can be fixed later. It's just that, it most probably will affect the fluidity of the reading experience. Moreover, I noticed, there is subtle switching of POV's? Please be careful as it might cause unnecessary confusion to the readers. Overall, it's good and keep improving. Thumbs up.

MyCharacterLeads
MyCharacterLeadsLv5MyCharacterLeads

Nice story. 👍 Intriguing plot. Characters were introduced fairly. The cold Joseph, the poor Christine, and the possessive demonic Celine. (That Celine is really getting into my nerves. Urggg!) Story development is quite in pace. 👍 Writing quality needs proofreading. Switching from 1st person to 3rd person was confusing. (Visible around middle chapter) I notice some typos error like 'het' instead of 'her'(forgot the chapter) Confusing and switching of tenses, past and present tense. (Also a problem of mine, haha) And lastly, the use of punctuation mark on a quotation mark. Usually, commas weren't needed after a quotation mark. e.g. "Addddds?" Instead of "Addddds?", (Don't need the commas anymore) Hope it help! 😊 PS. The last chapter improved a lot. Keep writing. 😄

Nzoputa
NzoputaLv4Nzoputa

Author has done a pretty good job with the novel, seeing that its a first novel. The story is interesting and not common, so thats a good thing.Good job author and keep it up.

Bikash2410
Bikash2410Lv2Bikash2410

I love it...The character is well described with her actions and i like your grammar..... I can't wait to read further....do update chapter fast..Good luck and wish you best of luck

MisterE05
MisterE05Lv4MisterE05

It has a few typos and gramatical issues here and there. For example skipping short words to complete a sentence. Such as: "I, Too, Off" Those of course are examples and not directed to the actual story. Point is some words are missing. I reccomend you too use "Google Docs". It has an inbuilt spell check and as for gramatic errors, make sure to read and edit a part a few times before posting. It is beyond helpful. As for the story, i did enjoy it. It has twists that would make even a grown man cry. Keep up the amazing work.

gabbi10192008
gabbi10192008Lv3gabbi10192008

Its different from the other stories i have read so far. I hope the author will cintinue to update it. It got my attention because its kind of fresh

ramaranth
ramaranthLv4ramaranth

Its very interesting. But there was a time that the updates took awhile. The author seems to be new but neverthelesd it has potential. I like it so far.

gabbi10192008
gabbi10192008Lv3gabbi10192008

I like the plot of the story. Although the author is new, the stoyline is clear, detailed and descriptive. I really like it so far. I hope to read more of this.

JSY_Lang
JSY_LangLv1JSY_Lang

Reading this story and get upset with how stupid Joseoh is and how naive the female lead is. when will she fight? anyways, goodjob to the author.

silverbabe
silverbabeLv5silverbabe

The writer has stopped updating for a long time. Its a good story and I will love to read it to the end, but it's sad that there are no new update for a long time

Olu_Maureen
Olu_MaureenLv5Olu_Maureen

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Olu_Maureen
Olu_MaureenLv5Olu_Maureen

I love this story and am still waiting patiently. Pls update the story for us. It's Been long. 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Olu_Maureen
Olu_MaureenLv5Olu_Maureen

This is an interesting story line.wow! I love it. It's really entertaining. Am already addicted to it. I couldn't even write chapter comments because I can't wait to read the next chapter,even when I have load of things to write. That is how good am enjoying. Ride on author . You are doing a good job👍😍😋❤️❤️

R123
R123Lv5R123

......The novel is very interesting...... .....It is the first time for me to read this type of story ....It began with a lot of misunderstandings that lead me to read the next chapters to know what had happened to the female lead .... ..And I really can't wait until its next update... .......Thanks for such an enjoyable story...

Lexmine
LexmineLv4Lexmine

Loving novel, still enjoying the novel so far. I know that the author is a little not too fast in updating the chapters but it is really really interesting and loving. Thanks for the novel 💝💖❤

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