safa_bukhari
Great read. Very romantic indeed. It just captures the readers and leaves them wanting more. Emmy has a somewhat timid personality and James is somewhat beastly and that makes it even more fun. If not a little annoying. FUN all the same. (I wish Emmy had said more to James when she first started working with him, but I guess there wouldn’t be a story without it.)
Writing is alright and the charcters seem sarcastic and interesting. There are a few grammatical errors and some of the chapter scenes are a little confusing to follow. But I think this has potential and I look forward to seeing what the author comes up with in the next few chapters. Keep up the good work author !