Reviews of Yin & Yang Pleasures of Cultivation
Yin & Yang Pleasures of Cultivation
CosmicPrime
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everything ok but i felt like clickbaited even until 70s chapter mc is still virgin [img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]
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I have to review this. Whatever i thought about this novel before reading it turned out to be a hoax. I thought this is a lame chinese ero novel and i was gonna skip it. I read review and thought to give it a try. I overestimated the story and in the end i ended up underestimating it. DO NOT GO BY NAME AND COVER OF THE NOVEL. Till the latest chapter i.e. 73 there is so solid r-18 scene,harem or any dual cultivation. This novel has a solid world setting which is disclosed bit by bit. Writing quality is also pretty good along with stable updates. The two main characters are interesting with decent personalities though such persona are commonly found in many novels. Some might not like the duo to be OP but i like OP protags so no problem there. They are OP due to their bloodline(plot armor duhhh) and for all the power ups and fast cultivation there's a proper reason. Even though they are OP they face immense problems when fighting truly powerful enemies, almost losing life. Plot armor isnt heavy so even that is good. Other characters are also decently fleshed out but again they are commonly found in many novels so idk how others will feel about it. I will tell the story in short here. MC and FML are part of an organisation as lab rats. They do diff types of experiments on all those that were caught by organisation.MC and FML have better conditions than rest coz they are special. One day one such experiment goes wrong and the duo are teleported along with some doctor/scientists. Now the duo are teleported in same area(forest) where they are taken as servants. They cleverly make their way out of it(killing some people) and make their way to city while increasing their power/cultivation. They get themselves admitted to an academy, do some face slapping, adventure in ancient labyrinth and other such events have happened till now. Though sounds common to all novels out there but i found the story pretty interesting and engaging, the way it is written. It is worth a shot instead of wasting other bs novels on this website or any other popcorn novel.( Everything is my personal opinion so it is not necessary that everyone will like it. Still give it a try and read few chapters) I hope author keeps writing with same momentum.....
I read this cause of the first review and I am glad I did. its as the review states, the title is misleading but in a good way. this is not smut [atleast 20 chps in theres none ]. Though considering all thats here and the content in the bk, I am guessing , the author kinda meant it in a literal term, meaning man and female? like the actual relationship between a man and women and how their relationship is used in the cultivation, [ cause reading the chps, especially the one with the wings shit thats what I got.] the 2 MC's seem to match each other and go stronger. the main MC is the male, and female is secondary. If you hate 2 MC's dont worry cause I too hate that shit but here, its actually done well. plus the male MC is the main main MC. And whilst it might have the usual clichés [ nothing wrong ] of a cultivation novel, this is different from em all cause the MC and his lover dont separate, rather go on the journey together. And this is really a first, its fresh. The MC is intelligent and yet also face smacking so thats good. And they are planners, that hide strength and wait for right moment, not some battle retards. Plus the relationship isnt rushed but build slowly. not some..' OH..so handsome , must be different from everyone '..or ' OH, you save me..have my children ' . none of that shit. rather the characters knew each other and its build up as the story goes. Its build well and isnt cringe nor too exaggerated. Its sweet but not annoying and isnt rushed. if you like romance, this is way better than most cultivation novels. its properly focused and is more realistic. [ as opposed others in this genre ] however, I was kinda confused by what happened in the starting, the research facility shit, I thought they transported from a modern cultivation world to a past cultivation world? or they were transported away from the facility? I am confused by that. all in all I like it cause its way different from almost all cultivation stories out there [ as of C20 ]. its dope GL author
I rarely drop novels this early but I just got fed up and tired of the MC. He doesn't make sense. Many of his decisions or interactions make little logical sense as if the author didn't flush out or think things through. The descriptions of the scenes and the world around the characters was mediocre at best. I'm out and don't care if things improve later on. Not when they lost me so early on.
Erm, I'm not gonna lie this felt like almost every single one of the reincarnation stories out there. However, the main character seems interesting, but again I lost hope in this book as soon as the girl entered. I honestly hope this doesn't turn into a flop. Another thing, what does the cover have to do with the story itself? The cover makes me not want to read at all since it will make me assume this is a female lead story. Besides these complaints, this is a good story and I hope you the best of luck author.
There are parts of the story that are well thought out and have a unique take on the cultivation shstem that differs from other stories. And i have no issue with them being able to fight stronger people, but at times it they can utterly destroy someone nearing the peak of a realm, but then a few days later absolutely struggle to fight someone at the same power. I haven’t read with the updates, as in keeping up with chapter releases. But reading through at once, it feels like the story is rushed and isn’t fully developed. A lot of things aren’t really explained or given background. It also seems that over 80% of females in this story look absolutely the same except hair/eye color. I know this sounds like i despise the story, but i truly don’t. I think the setting and the story itself are good, but a lot of potential is missed out on and lack of variety/creativity in characters. i.e. busty women with big butt… literally all of them and given the same body description.
It is best novel I read. MC is good, story good, characters good, world good. It says Harem but it seems like a couple only and doesn't seem to change. I mind either path. But good to know which way story goes. Some repeat of same description of green and red colors at different times for different things. But good writing. also don't forget to have chapter of rest and normal life after fights. I think it would be good. It is great. recommended.
All right so I honestly love the story as I love duel main character storys where we get TWO main characters for the price of one instead of some dumb male/female/AI System lead. For others looking at this and thinking is it good and do the tags correlate, uhhhh kinda? Theres a good bit of cultivation (basically what storys bout shocker) but I havent seen any R-18 or Harem stuff yet which I kinda apreciate. This story honestly feels like these two are kinda made for each other and other 3rd 4th and 5th wheel girl/guys just would be weird to me. All in all real good cultivation story with lovely little protags who are probable psychopaths and we love them for it.
Fazit: Great read! Chapters are rather long (which I like). There are basically 2 MCs with funny dynamics between them. The writing quality (grammar and spelling) are good - things are easy to read. The cultivation speed is fast - so there are no "holdups". The world background good - interesting enough ;) So once again - give it a try, there are many free chapters to get your own opinion!
To start with this story has a different way of going about things than most stories which isnt bad at all but being as light hearted as it has been it needs to either add a good amount of comedy or wit to carry it to betterment as only being lighthearted is horrible for a story in the long run. The personalities of the the mc and the women are fleshed out enough and frankly much better than the majority of the other webnovel novels have, but its gotten to mushy and the way the self confidence or any behaviour is shown between them has become repeated and is just making the story weak at this point, at this point the main characters need to be treated as normal people and behave normally rather than this stuff. The cultivation level jumping was already exaggerated and has since become just nonsense at this point since they got that chaos energy stuff, this has to been reduced at the divine realm to a normaler degree because rigjt now its just a pathetic joke the way theyre jumping entire realms. Just because every other novel makes the mc jump stages doesnt mean it has to be done and if it has to then certainly not like this. To summarize not bad for a novel just with issues which need to be fixed asap to stop it from becoming worse.
