10 Final very rough draft chapter 7

Very rough draft chapter 7 this is all i have writtes this far into the story workonf on the rewrite

Yellowstone 7

This chapter has talks about torture so this one is a bit violent

Mc was watching Jamie meet with a journalist he had already bugged the room the meeting was to take place in as she was leaving after saying she was happy that she's the ine to take everything from the duttons Jamie knocker out and started to kill her mc walks up behind Jamie and knocks him out he then puts both in his care tied up cand calls some people to clean the area mc then drives to the duttons ranch and get jhon, and than gets kayce as they get in they see Jamie and the reporter awake looking at each other and them he then drives to his house and goes to the lake and gets Jamie and the journalist out as he sits them on the dock he asks who she is and all the questions, turn out she was hired buy the becks tondo aome investigation and someone else to bring down the duttons and that they oppress the native american community, and are corrupted, i laugh a genuine laugh at her and she spits on me and I say that it isn't very nice to spit at one's saviour

I then look at Jamie and tisk

Poor Jamie tisc tisc tisc for for shame on you, he said he did nothing wrong and I scoff and I said that I know alot of things Jamie I know about what happend with Beth and he looked mortified and I said oh no one's supposed to know huh aw well I suppose i should ask why you would want to send assassins after the only family gave a fuck to raise you oh yes I know all about you rat, you think your father would have loved you after what he did I scoff and say that he is insane literally Jamie defended him and I laugh and said you ate a fool if ypu think he loved ypu as much as any of the duttons, and I playd a recording of garret talking with the beck brother boasting that he's had an inside man this whole time and jhon didn't even know and that he even got him to kill Beth's fist born by saying she'll shame his new family and he laughed Jamie looked shocked and said why and that he qas sorry and didn't mean to do anything I looked at him and shock my head and said ypu lies don't work on me fool, you're croccodile tears are nothing to me but reinforcing my opinions off you being a worm not even a snake because they actually have to be crafty nut to betraying family for someone you don't know is wrong mc then reached over and said the his eyes had allways been blinded by jealousy and that he saw the way he looked at his wives with list and want so he will take them mc then blinds him and feeds him his eyes while the journalist watches in shock

As Jamie is screaming mc then says that he converted Rips other people's things such as jhons cattle that he sold to the native Americans and then said they stole them causing a massive rift and loss of life between the two parties, mc then plays more evidence of jhon speaking to the becks about it and said they were supposed to do something but didn't do it, mc then takes Jamie's hands and slaps him with them and for telling lies I will take ypur tongue and the mc takes goes to take his tongue do you admit that yes yes stop please mc takes his tongue and forces it down his throat while alive he tells Jaime that he listened to to many lies and not enough truths and didn't want to dig deeper to under stand for this he will take his ears and braine and for last he will take his hear for he is UN feeling and has no need for it and mc proceed with cutting his ears and heart out then shots Jamie in the head he then puts Jamie in a large silver box to be sent to the marine camp to the incinerator.

while covered in blood I look at the journalist who is in shock and freaking out for you your punishment is I paused she shook and pissed her self, u continue is nothing asking questions isn't wrong but investigating politicians is just stupid and now you're here so what do you think? This is the dirty little secret of the world every company and politician is guilty of corruption why disrupt the nest that is society with shakes from the roots. Let them live in ignorance but I do warn you, you have caught the ire of powerful people, you have disrupted their game of politics and that's not smart mow you have 2 choices.

join my company and work in the investigation unit with your girlfriend or go back and try and survive while powerful people play catch the fox with a new toy they find. and trust me when I say the police won't give a fuck, hell there's a serial killer in the area and where yhe only people tracking him down.

I'll give you a day to think about it.

As the mc walks away he loudly cusses and says fuck I hate wet work but that scum deserved it.

I went digging threw all his tech shit and found his secrets and he was a certified deplorable human.

I give all this information to jhon and say some fuck ups are just insane fuck ups

I then hand Jhon jamies death recording

After a day Sarah and page are sitting infront off Me and Sarah is scared stiff and Paige is also worried,

Mc let's begin "Sarah, you have pissed people off I can help of you join my organisation and assist in investigation or other areas same as you now know this powerful people are after you both and I can stop this now you will need new names and identification and all that jazz so what say you?

The girls " yes we will join you "

Mc " good now go get ready for work you start in 20 min you'll be given an appointment and everything will be done through the Organisation"

Afterwards

He gets a phone he checks and answers immediately

Mc "hello old man is everything okay"

Old man "hello son, haha everything is fine, i was just calling to check on how things are down their"

Mc "everything is fine just cleaning up, just took care of a rat that was annoying"

Old man " good keep digging and you may find another, anyway good work now I under stand your operation is up and running i have received reports of the over active and old serial killers are being dealt with and the young ones are taken to be traind by the table good work."

Mc " quicly thanks the old man for the praise and allows him "

Old man "to continue, because only my self and our report manager that you send ypur reports too know about this I have also been watching the table and have spoken to the elder about a situation with a very skilled assassin leaving the feild the table decided to let him go whitch I thought was foolish however I lost the votes at least I didn't vote to try and enslave him fools.

I will look into this quietly and speak with the elder about this our talks help me think son we should meet adter tou finish this business for me.

Now for the business I have for you to do for me it is to do with an excommunicado agent there are too many being excommunicated now why and who is doing this I want to start asking who have these orders because it just says the table on the notes witch is also suspicious. Alot of mistakes like this is happening it is unnerving.

No this excommunicated person is like a ghost people have been hunting him for years he is a master of basically everything and know computers.better than anybody we will need his help another thing indent know whybhe was excommunicated for its starting to smell and indont like it the ild man says

Mc yes I agree to many incidents and removal of effective assets it is no longer trimming fat we have now hit muscle.

The old man hummer in agreement and says investigate him find him and speak with him.

Now that business is over tell me how is amrica and these views tou tell me off.

After a long conversation after business and then talking about the mountains I tell him I got the house for the lake built remotely its easier because it was 2 stories and i had all the plans ready as well as everything eslse it just need furnishings

However their is an issue.

Old man " ohmy boy why do you do this it was no problem I just needed to see the view"

Mc " father I apologise buy it was as we thought jhon would not budge to sell the land I got him to agree to me building the house because it was smaller and that we will not own it at all he says ypu can come and go when ypur there and have your privacy however they will own it.

The progress on the house on my ranch is slow unfortunately because I priorities the lake house"

Old man "you're to troublesome my boy, all is well we should go see it sometime"

While doing the final checks at badlse mc thought about this criminal organisation this underground operation is sanctioned by the high table to investigate civilian issues if they start attracting to much attention to the under ground net work.

While thinking this mc mumbles Luckily he started this branch here after looking at the reports from new York that would have been a bitch to clean up after the Tarasov Mob incident when the the man dubbed boogieman wanted out and did the impossible I would like to meet him, under friendly arrangements

We mainly track and kill serial killers and potentially dangerous people or information will go missing we also track and kill all enemies off the table in montana and near north west America and we may do some expeditions into Canada if the branch north needs help with something or information on killers and things we share that information to be able to track the killers and others of use to the table.

After finishing up work and makeing sure the security is secure dose he leave and goes home and he eats with Amina and Farah and sleeps with amina they were still talking if they should decide to have another child yet the endid up agreeing that if she comes to be pregnant that it will be a wonderful surprise.

After a few days brake I get a report that the beck brothers are getting antsy because they haven't heard from Jamie and they want the report soon from the journalist or they will take it onto there own hands to destroy Yellowstone, there was also a report of a murder in the reservation against the casino that rainwater built. He then got notification from the Canadian organisation he requested information on the excommunicated agent that was makeing their way south and into America they where behind him and playing slow to catch up they sent an updated picture off the man, he felt as though he has sceen this person before.

After this mc and Amina along with Farah are invited by Samantha to go over and spend a bit more family time together and become more comfortable with one another. I asked Amina of she wanted to go and she said she would like to because Samantha is easy to talk with, we asked if Farah wanted to go as well.

she said sure and wanted to learn how to ride a horse she then explaind that Ahiga and Ahanu along with Tate were going to ask someone to teach them and she said she wants to learn as well and asked if that's okay, I said she can do whatever she wanted as long as she feels safe, protected and to never give into the pressure of friends telling you to do something she dosent want to do.

She said thanks dad and i dont think i have ever smiled a more genuine smile i was so happy, I the said because we don't have much horse experience i don't think she will be able to ride by herself for quite sometime and that her brothers after they learn could also start teaching her she just had to ask them.

After this i then said that we would have to go into Bozeman because I'm not sure if Dutton has any Muslim specific riding wear she was happy and then thanked me again and said that she will talk with the boys about teaching her the basics of careing for a horse when we get to Samanthas house.

We all then get into the SUV and drive to the duttons ranch we pull up to the main house and we hop out

I see kayce and rip checking over a new horse makeing sure it's fit and healthy I walk over and check up on kayce he said therapy is going good and that Monica os much more understanding of what he went through and he is more understanding of what she qent through woth the loss of thire 2nd child I apologised to him for his loss and he gave me a sad nod I then said hi to rip, i gotta go its good to see yous again Samantha and that they can talk later.

After I cought up to Amina and Farah as we went to go looks for Samantha and the kids, we found them and had a picnick after we ate I was sitting with Amina and Samantha watching the kids play enjoying the peace and sound of joyas laughter I didn't know when but I must have went to sleep, I was woken up by Amina and Samantha brushing my hair softly I woke up and asked

Mc " how long have I been asleep?"

Amina "about an hour, but we should probably hop up soon."

Samantha "yeah I think kayce might have needed you for something."

Mc " okay I'll jump up call me if ypu need me"

Mc gets up and goes to find kayce, his firest stop is the field to see if he was with the horse plus it was close to next he went to the bunk house for stable hands after this he went to ask jhon where kayce is while going to jhon he hears rip.

Rp " who is this Christopher walker person i dont like him he is always here and puts me on edge

Jhon " dont worry he is trust worthy and you will find out who he is when he lets everyone k kw who he is when thaybis i dont knkw but its not my decision to make.

Mc after hearing this I leave not wanting to eves drop and to continue my search for kayce, i walk into the bunk house and see a massive surprise all the ranch hands are here and a man I've been looking for. I smile a predatory smile and walk over and ask

Mc "can I take a seat at this table? I ask deliberately and while looking at the man who's on the other end of the table.

Ad I say this his head snaps to attention and a light sheen if sweat is starting to form on his brow

The stranger stuttering said "o of course have a seat this isn't my table to day who may have a seat and not"

Mc " I smile some more and humm and then say, I was not expecting to find you so soon and so easily no wonder why ypu were right under my nose, well no matter the point is that I found you and the high table has questions and you are the one who has the answers.

Cooperation will be met with hospitality however hostility will be met with severe consequences do you understand... good now what will it be ?

Just then the door opens and other ranch hands walk in without looking I oelrder them out 2 listen one stays it was kayce, what happend walker? What did cowboy do?

Mc "I dont know know, thats part of the reason I am asking"

The stranger now known as cowboy says

" I'll cooperat as long as you don't hurt the ranch or others that u care fore"

You have my word nothing will happen to the ranch your family however is harder to say because files have been deleted and we need to investigate the cause of this.

Now come with me we have alot to discuss I stand up and cowboy dose as well we walk out and kacys asked what all this is about I said it's complicated, as soon as we get out the front a blacked out SUV pulls up its basically looks like an APC it's chunky, as soon as it stops on the drive way 5 guys get out in full armour with guns I hand him over and they take him and put him in the back they get in and took off just as fast as they came I said to kayce depending on conditions he may or may not be back in a while, as we walk back rip and jhon came flying out of the house

RIP "What the fuck was that?, kayce you just let a ranch hand be abducted infront of us and did nothing and you who the fuck are youand who were they?"

as soon as RIP was infront off Me I let him have it and hit him in the jaw, I then hit him again on the way down we stand up and we looked at each other and then it was war we traded blows and he cought me with an elbow across the eye and then another and opend me up I then got him with an uppercut as I was hitting him again he hit me again and blood was now free flowing rip over extanded a hook and I kneed him in the chest as he was leaning down as he was backing up I hit him in his sides and he hit mine after this my shirt was to wet with blood down the front so I took it off and everyone could see my scars and tatoos the rip rook his off, I used my shirt to clean some blood from my face and threw it on the floor then we

re-engageed and fought like dogs we were both bleeding now covered on each other's blood and we started to trade blows agin I open a cut on his shoulder and he opens up my cheek I than go for a take down but my left leg slips I then get kneed in the chest and stumbled back he rushed and pushed each other to the ground he started throwing slow but heavy blows but was slowing down I then hit him in the liver a few times and he stops I push him of me I couldn't see anymore and then I'm not top of him and look down at him and I realised why he stoped while looking down I see him we looked like what we did when we were kids and I laughed out a self depreciating laugh and I said brothe thats enough for today well talk tomorrow if we can.

[[This is a real fight by the way it's jim miller vs joe lauzon]]

I then got up and saw a blacked fire truck looking thing that pulled in I knew who they were my secretary was already here there and she slaps me and says that my father would be disappointed in me I went from standing proud to slumping like a dog in trouble she than orders me into the vehicle and I climb in and they start checking me over it was a small mobile medicsl facility with all the basics off another came and went to check on him they start they then bring him over and check him up as well after we were cleaned up and a few more stitch heavier I went over to jhon and said well talk about all this tomorrow he agreed and I went to Samantha and asked if we can sleep over at her place she said ofcourse

We go there and both Amina and Samantha help me into the shower and clean me after I was sore and tired they then had their own showers and came back and helped me to a bed an I slept for the night Amina and Samantha shared the bed in the guest room and cam back to help me in the morning I thanked them and apologised to Amina for that she had to share a bed she said that she had no problems with it and would have like if I was with them for more comfort but that she didn't want to be their when we decided to marry and sleep with each other I replied with an ofcourse and hiw did you feel about it Samantha she said she liked it and didn't feel so alone and that she would also be more comfortable with me there but not to see the personal nights between myself and Amina I also thanked her for her understanding and said that I under stood and than thanked them properly with a kiss on the cheeks for both of them.

Mother

Samantha Long (soon walker)

Twins

Older 12 boy Ahiga (fighter) Long 2006

Younger 12 boy Ahanu (laughter) Long 2006

And het daughter

girl 6 Istas (snow) Long 2012

And for them to meet my family which is

Amina (honesty) walker

Mc married in Afghanistan in 2005

Farah (happieness) 2006

walker biological daughter

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