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3 Years Later

Daniel is now 16 years old.

He's writing his fourth novel.

It's the only novel he's felt good about.

He started it around 3 months ago, but he had the idea around a year ago.

Daniel spent a lot of time planning it out and revising the original draft.

Although, Daniel still had his doubts on how effective he was at getting his message across.

๐˜๐˜ด ๐˜ต๐˜ฉ๐˜ช๐˜ด ๐˜ณ๐˜ฆ๐˜ข๐˜ญ๐˜ญ๐˜บ ๐˜จ๐˜ฐ๐˜ฐ๐˜ฅ ๐˜ฆ๐˜ฏ๐˜ฐ๐˜ถ๐˜จ๐˜ฉ?

Daniel constantly wanted to get better.

To a certain extent, he would long for the feeling of hopelessness when he wrote something horrible, this would make it a good challenge for him. He loved to mold the junk in to something beautiful, or at the very least something palatable.

It was therapeutic to make something bad he wrote in to to something that he found worthy. It would fill him with glee whenever he improved his writing with his own two hands.

Daniel felt like he could do anything as long as he set out to do it.

He could make countless worlds, as big as the galaxy or as small as a coffin.

He enjoyed making something that no one else could, to explore an idea that no one else had thought of. And he could do this infinitely, there was no shortage of ideas.

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After 3 more months of grueling revisions, Daniel finally sent in his novel to 3 publishers.

One of them was the biggest publisher in the country, PolarBear Publishing. The other was McAllister Publishing. Then, the third, was a smaller publisher, that's a subsidiary of PolarBear called Warriors Publishing.

The title of Daniel's novel was called "The Quiet Man."

The novel, starts out with a man, who is sitting quietly, on a bench in front of his apartment.

The man begin to list everything that is dear to him.

Items in his apartment.

Material things

He talks about their placement in his apartment, as he has memorized the position of everything in it.

Not everything is tidy or straight, but he knows their exact position.

He doesn't like others knowing about this obsessive trait of his.

They would probably think that it was weird.

He talks about some of the people he sees in his daily life.

Many people are then depicted or talked about by this man.

He talks about the daily lives of a selected few who walk by his apartment.

He talk about his co-workers, what they hate, what they love, he knows very intimate things about them.

They don't know how much he knows about them, they think that he is just a normal man.

Just someone who likes to keep to himself.

And, they would be right, if he were not a murderer.

Even now, as he sits on the park bench, he thinks about the man lying is in his apartment, dead.

๐˜๐˜ฆ'๐˜ด ๐˜ฑ๐˜ณ๐˜ฐ๐˜ฃ๐˜ข๐˜ฃ๐˜ญ๐˜บ ๐˜ด๐˜ต๐˜ช๐˜ญ๐˜ญ ๐˜ญ๐˜บ๐˜ช๐˜ฏ๐˜จ ๐˜ต๐˜ฉ๐˜ฆ๐˜ณ๐˜ฆ, ๐˜ช๐˜ฏ ๐˜ฉ๐˜ช๐˜ด ๐˜ฐ๐˜ธ๐˜ฏ ๐˜ธ๐˜ฐ๐˜ณ๐˜ญ๐˜ฅ.

๐˜ž๐˜ช๐˜ต๐˜ฉ ๐˜ง๐˜ณ๐˜ฆ๐˜ด๐˜ฉ ๐˜ฃ๐˜ญ๐˜ฐ๐˜ฐ๐˜ฅ, ๐˜ต๐˜ฉ๐˜ข๐˜ต'๐˜ด ๐˜ฑ๐˜ณ๐˜ฐ๐˜ฃ๐˜ข๐˜ฃ๐˜ญ๐˜บ ๐˜ณ๐˜ถ๐˜ฏ ๐˜ค๐˜ฐ๐˜ญ๐˜ฅ, ๐˜ณ๐˜ถ๐˜ฏ๐˜ฏ๐˜ช๐˜ฏ๐˜จ ๐˜ฅ๐˜ฐ๐˜ธ๐˜ฏ ๐˜ฉ๐˜ช๐˜ด ๐˜ฏ๐˜ฆ๐˜ค๐˜ฌ. ๐˜š๐˜ฐ๐˜ฐ๐˜ต๐˜ฉ๐˜ช๐˜ฏ๐˜จ ๐˜ต๐˜ฉ๐˜ฆ ๐˜ฃ๐˜ข๐˜ค๐˜ฌ ๐˜ฐ๐˜ง ๐˜ฉ๐˜ช๐˜ด ๐˜ฉ๐˜ฆ๐˜ข๐˜ฅ, ๐˜ข๐˜ด ๐˜ช๐˜ต ๐˜ด๐˜ญ๐˜ฐ๐˜ธ๐˜ญ๐˜บ ๐˜ฎ๐˜ข๐˜ฌ๐˜ฆ๐˜ด ๐˜ช๐˜ต'๐˜ด ๐˜ธ๐˜ข๐˜บ ๐˜ฅ๐˜ฐ๐˜ธ๐˜ฏ ๐˜ฉ๐˜ช๐˜ด ๐˜ฃ๐˜ข๐˜ค๐˜ฌ.

๐˜'๐˜ฅ ๐˜ฌ๐˜ช๐˜ญ๐˜ญ ๐˜ต๐˜ฐ ๐˜ฃ๐˜ฆ ๐˜ญ๐˜บ๐˜ช๐˜ฏ๐˜จ ๐˜ฅ๐˜ฐ๐˜ธ๐˜ฏ, ๐˜ญ๐˜ฐ๐˜ฐ๐˜ฌ๐˜ช๐˜ฏ๐˜จ ๐˜ถ๐˜ฑ ๐˜ข๐˜ต ๐˜ต๐˜ฉ๐˜ฆ ๐˜ค๐˜ฆ๐˜ช๐˜ญ๐˜ช๐˜ฏ๐˜จ, ๐˜ธ๐˜ช๐˜ต๐˜ฉ ๐˜ฐ๐˜ฏ๐˜ญ๐˜บ ๐˜ฎ๐˜บ ๐˜ต๐˜ฉ๐˜ฐ๐˜ถ๐˜จ๐˜ฉ๐˜ต๐˜ด ๐˜ช๐˜ฏ ๐˜ฃ๐˜ฆ๐˜ต๐˜ธ๐˜ฆ๐˜ฆ๐˜ฏ ๐˜ฎ๐˜ฆ ๐˜ข๐˜ฏ๐˜ฅ ๐˜ต๐˜ฉ๐˜ฆ ๐˜ฉ๐˜ข๐˜ณ๐˜ฅ๐˜ธ๐˜ฐ๐˜ฐ๐˜ฅ ๐˜ง๐˜ญ๐˜ฐ๐˜ฐ๐˜ณ.

๐˜•๐˜ฐ ๐˜ธ๐˜ฐ๐˜ณ๐˜ณ๐˜ช๐˜ฆ๐˜ด, ๐˜ถ๐˜ฏ๐˜ค๐˜ฐ๐˜ฏ๐˜ค๐˜ฆ๐˜ณ๐˜ฏ๐˜ฆ๐˜ฅ.

๐˜‰๐˜ถ๐˜ต, ๐˜ฏ๐˜ฐ๐˜ธ, I'm ๐˜ต๐˜ฉ๐˜ฆ ๐˜ฐ๐˜ฏ๐˜ฆ ๐˜ธ๐˜ฉ๐˜ฐ ๐˜ฉ๐˜ข๐˜ด ๐˜ต๐˜ฐ ๐˜ฅ๐˜ฆ๐˜ข๐˜ญ ๐˜ธ๐˜ช๐˜ต๐˜ฉ this mess.

๐˜œ๐˜ฏ๐˜ญ๐˜ถ๐˜ค๐˜ฌ๐˜บ, ๐˜ช๐˜ด๐˜ฏ'๐˜ต ๐˜ช๐˜ต?

He thinks about all the mundane things that he has in his life, and he decides that he likes them too much to just let them go.

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There were many clever aspects about Daniel's book, the most interesting was the relationships the main character had with those that were close to him.

Often times, the main character would leave hints for people regarding his obscure nature, but no one ever catches on.

His friends would just laugh it off.

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Warrior Publishing

"..."

Carl Jacobs was reading a manuscript sent in by a newbie author. His name was Daniel Hernandez.

"A Quiet Man"

This novel had been in the backburner for 2 weeks.

The whole office had been backed up with new manuscripts ever since one of their novels blew up all over social media for its crass and less than favorable view of women in the US.

This was also partly due to the author being a young woman, only 23 years old.

They had been quite excited about its release, but it even blew ๐˜ฑ๐˜ข๐˜ด๐˜ต their expectations. The book, "Caterwauling," even made it on the best sellers list. They were expecting it to get in to the top 10.

But, that's not what took Carl Jacobs attention at the moment. What had Carl glued to his seat was the book he was holding in his hands, as it was so unbelievable, he had trouble understanding if it was a newbie author who wrote this.

Every part of it was filled with information, that made you want to understand more about the story. Every single aspect of this novel made you interested.

Even the details about mundane things, like a comb on top of a desk, was interesting to him.

He figured that whoever wrote this must have been writing for quite some time.

Immediately, after reading it, he decided to contact the author, rushing to be the first before this manuscript was snatched up.

to all the people who have read this before, know that i have made some changes to this chapter, and some things may be different.

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