i like the idea but the writing can use some work but not much. maybe make the dialogue more natural and not just colons for speaking otherwise good luckkkk
Good story. Nice plot. Love the characters. Keep up the good work. And keep making new stories. Awesome job. Excited to more of your works. Fighting!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
I like the story. It has this eerie feeling in it. It also gives you chills. I just wish that it would update fast cause I'm really curious about what will happen next!
You're an amazing writer! I'm so happy I found this story♡♡♡♡♡I love your style and the way you present the characters in your stories. I'm totally IN LOVE with this book and I'll be waiting for next chapters.