RoseP_17
Hey there! It's your author here! Who is being shameless enough to review on her own book! 🤫🤭 Anyways, jokes apart. Its great to see you visiting my book here! And thanks a bunch for that.😘 This is my first time writing such a genre, as my main theme from the start had always been Romance. So I am trying a new one😤 which I hope you all will like too! If possible please leave a review right here! So that I'll be able to know how this work of mine is and which areas I might need to improve in the future. You know what, just write what ever comes to your mind about my book. Does not have to be something good, infact if you do write something bad I'll not really see it as something bad but rather I'd see it as a chance to improve so that I can grow~😊 (☞゚ヮ゚)☞So just leave a review here!☜(゚ヮ゚☜) That will help me improve my writing. I'll be looking forward to reading them then! Take care~
Okay I was actually curious about this work because it said “dark” in hash tags, and I’m all in for it. Leafed through several chapters and got absorbed into the story and how well written it was. From grammar to punctuation to dialogues to characters - all seems enthralling. I’d recommend people to give this one a try, as it is author’s first work outside of their genre. I think it’s brilliant 🔥🔥🔥🔥
Okay. First thing, the synopsis was kind of dull in some way. The first chapter looks a prologue for me. To be honest, the first chapter has a lotsa questions on it. Yeah, totally look prologue. But the world's name is kind of cute. The structure of the sentence needs improvement. And since is crime-thriller genre, the detailing must be precise. I haven't read all of the chapters but so far, it's... anyway, you'll do good.