Reviews of Wolf in the desert of ice

I have no problem with the plot and story quality. But there is a problem with writing style that made me press the brakes of my car and run then brake again in succession. There is sometimes sentenses that doesn't start with capital letters and there's an overuse of commas in the story. Maybe you should lessen it? Haha....peace my friend ✌️ I don't want to be a critique BTW but I think you needed it the most right now 😉

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Nice story at all. Though there's some issues with letters and punctuations I think it's a great story! You defined your plot nicely and I don't believe you are a new writer! However, keep it up!

The story is captivating. I wanted to just scan through the first three chapters but I got curious and kept going could not stop, since I wanted to know what will happen next. I love the free flow of narration. For me the story is worth the read.

The concept of the book is unqiue and the characters are very refreshing. The plot is smooth and the world background is very well explained. Overall the book is immersive. Hope to see more chapters!!!

Nice story line and great character development!! I like, I like, I like!! It's fresh and really nice. I just want to snuggle in a blanket and read to my heart content.

Hi! This is kerawood, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail. This contest is free entry.