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Wolf in the desert of ice

JimothyJonkers

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Read Wolf in the desert of ice novel written by the author JimothyJonkers on Webnovel, This serial novel genre is Fantasy stories, covering adventure, fantasy, . ✓ Newest updated ✓ All rights reserved

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The insurrection, Shifters, the protectors of the world, had risen in riot and waged war following Atyer, their twisted leader. He lead the rebellion, conducting twisted experiments to "improve" the shifters until the allied races finally put him down. Since than, Shifters have been looked at with mistrust and hate, blamed for the war, even those who had nothing to do with it. Shiek, a shifter, meets Oki, a dragon girl, and together they are tasked with leading the Shifters back to their prime in these turbulent times

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Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4Mel_Aniv

I have no problem with the plot and story quality. But there is a problem with writing style that made me press the brakes of my car and run then brake again in succession. There is sometimes sentenses that doesn't start with capital letters and there's an overuse of commas in the story. Maybe you should lessen it? Haha....peace my friend ✌️ I don't want to be a critique BTW but I think you needed it the most right now 😉

The_Procrastinator
The_ProcrastinatorLv4The_Procrastinator

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Bunny_Jinnie
Bunny_JinnieLv2Bunny_Jinnie

Nice story at all. Though there's some issues with letters and punctuations I think it's a great story! You defined your plot nicely and I don't believe you are a new writer! However, keep it up!

Juliet_Omuadona
Juliet_OmuadonaLv1Juliet_Omuadona

The story is captivating. I wanted to just scan through the first three chapters but I got curious and kept going could not stop, since I wanted to know what will happen next. I love the free flow of narration. For me the story is worth the read.

kpthe1
kpthe1Lv4kpthe1

The concept of the book is unqiue and the characters are very refreshing. The plot is smooth and the world background is very well explained. Overall the book is immersive. Hope to see more chapters!!!

QueenRani6
QueenRani6Lv2QueenRani6

Nice story line and great character development!! I like, I like, I like!! It's fresh and really nice. I just want to snuggle in a blanket and read to my heart content.

wheataa
wheataaLv1wheataa

Hi! This is kerawood, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail. This contest is free entry.

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