JDFister
Writing Quality: This story's prose is phenomenal. Varied sentence structure. Snappy dialogue. Clear and concise all the way through with visual descriptions in the front of all the scenes. Action is never confusing. Stability of Updates: Author says they update monday wednesday and friday. It seems they've dumped a lot of chapters here in a short time, but otherwise it looks like they've kept to that schedule perfectly. Story Development: The promise set at the beginning seems to be that there's going to be a tournament, and soon you throw another character into the mix who are inevitably going to clash. Every chapter feels like progress is being made in the plot and it's only a matter of time before we're going to see this "conflux" that's hinted at in the beginning. Character Design: There are three main characters and they each seem to have unique and succinct personalities. The perspective character does carry some biases against humans from the beginning, but they feel more naturally as a result of his environment, not so much due to full-stop character flaws that won't change. World Background: The author throws a lot of stock fantasy races into a world with a few more unique set pieces. The world itself though feels lived in. There are a lot of interplaying factions and rivalries that seems to have existed before this story began.
Wow, that was pretty good. I can't wait to read more. Quality: Top notch, felt like a professional novel Stability: I only started just now but it doesn't look like you've gone more than 3 days Story Development: I cant say enough good things here. I just relly want to read what happens next Character Design: Great. I can usually tell who is tallking just by what they say World Background: looks like the story is mostly just in one small space(the arena) but theres a whole world being talked in the background. Even mention a war going on currently
I only at chapter 9 and already I have to see what happens next, I just have to! Great high fantasy and the MC's charge the story forward really quickly. The style fits like a glove, and the world and its inhabitants are created fluidly as the story unfolds. The author clearly intends to keep it fantastical and then some. Entertaining and surprising so far.
Writing Quality: 5/5 Reads really clean. Good action scenes. Good dialogue. Stability of Updates: 5/5 Updates every Monday, Wednesday and Friday without fail, even the same time each day. Story Development: 5/5 Starts with just a simple tournament arc, but political intrigue layers in as time goes by. Character Design: 5/5 Cool little group of friends and the cast slowly adds more characters as the story develops. World Background: 5/5 Lots of different races and nations all with their own motivations. The magic system is really complex. Feels like a Brandon Sanderson-esque system with hard rules.