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just keep writing the story just keep writing the story just keep writing the story just keep writing the story just keep writing the story

LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Amazing work. Please keep it up and write more! I love the lists of items, books, shops, lineage, vaults, and what not. It really makes it seem more alive and have more depth. He really shot forward in progress quickly which I love. No Slow poke here!

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The dirty talk is cheesy, sometimes even more then a little cringe, but it's a fun read. Something you can divulge in to waste time. Writing quality Is aight, not the best at times but ok. The story development is quite alright, the first few 10-15 chapters are build up to Harry's personality change. It's good. The Mc himself, an AU Harry potter is alright. Again, the dirty talk this guy seems to spew every second is very cheesy but he isn't annoying nor stupid. This guy updates his book pretty frequently so don't worry about having to wait to long for new chapters. World background is a 1 star. It's Harry potter, not the author's own creation. Have a good day :)

man I won't say anything useless I just want to tell that novel is awesome and I will appreciate it if you don't drop it midway like some other author and continue this novel.thanks for understanding man and it's a great novel

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I have read many Harry Potter fanfics and when I say many, I mean MANY, and in my opinion, this is steadily becoming the best of them. Only losing to Harry The Lord of the Harem who unfortunately went on hiatus. The ratio of R-18 and plot is great and I believe that if the author-san doesn't give up on it, it will become the best, for sure.

My problems with this fanfic: 1-The elements introduced from chapter 23 onwards make it very difficult to believe that: -The Potters had to hide (and die) at Godric Hollow. -Harry was kept at the Dursleys until Sirius escaped (if Dobby could reach him...) 2-Too many new things piled up since chapter 23. Too much of Super Potter Family.

great novel and history, most likely with his tool he will tame and make his women submissive in bed, making his attitude and character become softer, which would include daphne as well, he could also have 10 children per woman. If she had 100 women in her harem or more of hers, then she would have 1000 children or more, which more or less is needed to repopulate all the houses she controls. It would also be advisable for Harry to propose to several of her wives to marry at the same time, so she would not have a problem with who is the first, second wife and stuff. -also, since you mentioned earlier that Harry would become king, because he does not begin to merge all the houses that he has in his name, thus creating an extremely powerful house, naming it with a new name, as marking the beginning of a new era ?. - You might think that this would be extremely difficult, because the boxes where the soul pieces of the ancestors are would be opposed. But this could be solved with Voldemort and even Grindelwald if he is still alive, for example, if Voldemort revives, he would arm his remaining army, he could also go to the prison where Grindelwald is and put him under a curse to control him, even leaving programmable commands, like a sleeper agent. - There would be a fierce war, several houses would be destroyed (the houses where the paintings with pieces of ancestors souls would be found mostly would be destroyed, the houses with the boxes that Harry controls would be destroyed, which could also give a character development to the lose that too), voldemort would eventually be destroyed along with his horcrux, dying completely, grindelwald would survive because he is very elusive, powerful and not bad in the head like voldy, but in the true death of voldemort, a spell that this He put all his followers that could be in his mark that they have as Death Eaters, even Grindelwald. - In case Verda is assassinated, the spell would consist of destroying all of Great Britain and causing the greatest possible damage to all magical Europe and Muggle Europe, as he is already truly dead, he has nothing to lose, this would cause total destruction, With almost all of magical Europe being destroyed, Muggle Europe would suffer serious damage as well, but not so much because the wizards would not allow the Muggles to discover them (this would cause most of the wizarding deaths), as the Death Eaters would not hold back and would quasi the greatest possible destruction, almost all the wizarding houses and wizards of europe died, but in the end, harry, his women and his friends with a few other wizards survived, and they managed to eliminate all those death eaters and avoid being discovered by the muggle, but to an extremely high cost, putting the wizards who survived in Europe in danger of extinction. - As most of the houses had been extinguished, the bank of the goblins had been destroyed, practically all the houses with the paintings that had pieces of souls from their ancestors had been destroyed and many more properties, the magicians of Europe faced danger of extinction, urgent changes were needed of the magicians in the magical world of Europe, and an urgent leader was needed for that, which would be Harry the hero of war, here Harry would not have opposition from the ancestors and current magicians, thus that it would merge all the houses that it has under its control, which would be many, plus the ones it conquered in the recent war, it would create the largest and most powerful house in Europe, practically becoming a royal family. - With magic he would move various properties and lands of the houses that he conquered and has in his power (houses, towers, hatcheries, mountains, meadows, magical beings and creatures, it would be like a cut and paste) and would put them all in one place, merging them, making their territory the size of a city !, which would be their place of residence, would be like the nucleus of the royal capital, since around it the surviving houses of their friends and the surviving magicians would move, recreating a New Avalon !, rebuilding the destroyed magical Europe forming a magical empire that would encompass all of Europe, one of its decrees could be that polygamy is mandatory and that each woman must give birth to at least 10 children, this would be to replenish the population of wizards in danger of death, they would also look for Muggle-born wizards in the muggle world to increase their numbers quickly, Harry would have his huge harem as king and they would all be beauties and would have what to do (make babies). - Although Muggle Europe suffered damage, and the Muggles did not discover the wizards, this causes international tension among Muggles, since Europe thought they were being attacked by other Muggle countries, igniting the spark of what in a few years would be the third war muggle mudial. After a few years of rebuilding magical Europe, international tensions between Muggles would have increased, causing the Third World War (indirectly caused by Voldemort), and with more developed nuclear bombs, the result of the war would be disastrous for the whole world, And wizards all over the world would not allow foolish Muggles to ruin the planet and they will no longer endure their stupid wars, so they would have no choice but to reveal themselves, causing a shock to Muggles, they would obviously go to war, Since humans in this case the Muggles, obviously, will destroy what they cannot control, which in this case would be the wizards, obviously the nuclear bombs would be ineffective since the wizards deactivated and destroyed them all over the world. - This case would not happen in Europe, since as the author in previous chapters presented Harry with Queen Elizabeth, plus the years that passed between and after the war, the Queen would have supported Harry with a plan to merge the magical world and Muggle Europe, and part of the plan achieved is that books and movies on magic became very popular among Muggles (introducing wizarding world culture, history, creatures, etc.), practically becoming a cult series, and having fans all over Europe, in other continents they did not have much popularity because the magical governments of there did not allow it. With this the revelation of the existence of wizards in Europe was not so shocking for the Muggles, since they were half brainwashed with what would happen if magic existed, secret societies, new adventures, etc. And after a few arguments, the Muggle countries of Europe merged into one and consequently merged with the wizarding world of Europe. While in the other continents the war had already ended, the magicians won, but they did not know very well what to do next, so after looking for answers they noticed what was happening in Europe and followed their example. thus merging the magical and muggle worlds completely, several things are going to change. - If later the author wanted to unite all the magical and muggle countries of the world in one, he could use the long route and and not so difficult, which would be that Harry buys and owns several properties around the world, has a lot of fans around the world too, being an influential figure worldwide, marrying various women from powerful homes and families around the world, making it slowly and without anyone noticing, that world unification is within reach, and the short and short route. extremely difficult, would it be an alien invasion, something like the zerg maybe? there would be a terrible war, but they could have destroyed the invaders completely, but clearly the world would have been damaged, the world population would have decreased enormously, and also they do not know if Those enemies will return, so a world unification is necessary, Harry would be the ruler of this new era! And he would have thousands of beautiful women as his wives! Also with all the magicians in the world and an extremely powerful spell, he could merge all the continents into one, making them attract like magnets, recreating Pangea, natural disasters would be solved with magic, so there would be no problem, and then what would follow would be the star wars against the zerg !. - What do you think of the author? This novel has this potential and the path is clear, since you have already made the bases, the path is out of date, and it is only necessary to write as always with its great quality. - PSDT 1: for Harry to grow and develop as a character, in addition to losing the portraits or paintings of his ancestors in the destruction of the houses that in my opinion limit him to a fusion of houses, it would also be necessary for Sirius and Remus to die in the war against voldemort, since I think that having Sirius alive is limiting him a bit, and his death would contribute a lot to his development as a character, andromeda would help in his emotional recovery and he could be very protective of her, of course, in the Future Harry could be revived with a powerful magic that developed Sirius, Remus, his parents, to live the life they should have lived, and it would be great to see their reactions to how the world is now and their son too. -PSDT 2: since you have done the tournament of three magicians, will you make Harry sleep with all the candles from that magic school in France including fleur, etc?, Doing that would be great! a harem of veelas, also if you buy those that are locked up it would be great and other races too. PSDT 3: artificial intelligence would be great if it were developed, as it could help Harry handle all the paperwork he will have in the future as ruler, and with magic it would not get out of control. PSDT 4: Harry should not kill bellatrix, it is a very light punishment, he should turn her into his *** toy, mentally breaking her, and making her his brood mare, taking out 100 children, his enemy women could suffer the same fate but to a lesser extent, what will happen to voldemort's daughter if you make her appear, maybe she will become harry's favorite brood mare ?, and he could also turn his fanatic romilda vane into his brood mare that she would surely love,

One of the best fanfics i have ever read. It is an au which may put some people off but i like it a lot despite the occasional inconsistency. There is lots of good character development and the pacing is good(even the filler is interesting and well used to develop the world and its characters). I strongly appreciate how most character choices have some thought put into them(aka the characters arent dumb even if they are more promiscuous than normal, which i also like). Overall, this story is far above average for this site and clicks with me. The author has set the stage for an excellent story and i hope they can maintain the quality of work they have shown. I eagerly await more.

Gracias por sacarme una sonrisa con está maravillosa historia una forma de ver el mundo de Harry diferente pero con los valores del libro y debo ser el primero en admitir que pensé que sería sólo otra historia mediocre como muchas otras pero hoy agradezco haberle dado la oportunidad y leerla ya que me e llevado una grata sorpresa con tu mundo mágico no es sólo una copia y ya, es tu "mundo" uno maravilloso que te atrapa y no te suelta uno en donde te sumerges en el

verrryyyyyyyyyy gooooooood

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