ch 2

Pov 3rd

there is a boy laying down on the ground covered in brushes and blood leaking from his mouth in an alley.

the boy has pale white skin with lapis colored eyes with short jet black. the boy is wearing a scarlet vest with black pants.

The boy's name is Ling yang he is a orphan and he is 13 yrs old.

He was abounded by his parents at the age of because he has a red soul realm later he lived in the streets of glory and always looking for scraps of food to eat and stealing money from people, so one day he was stealing money from a person from sacred family but he was caught and got beaten in a alley and got knocked unconscious while he was unconscious he heard a voice saying "wake up kid" repeatedly and when Ling yang woke up he saw that he was laying down on a soft red carpet instead of solid ground and saw he was inside of a hall made up of black stone bricks instead of an alley. he look around the place wondering where he was as he was thinking where he is, he heard domineering voice saying "kid if have enough of looking around pay attention to me" when he looked at where the voice came from and he saw infront of him was a throne and sitting on it was crimson. When Ling yang saw crimson he was scared and asked "who are you and where am I?"

"I am crimson the chaos emperor and we are in your mindscape"said crimson

"um what is a mindscape" replied with confusion Ling yang

"it's very simple mindscape is a world that created inside your mind" explained crimson

"so we are inside of my mind?"questioned Ling yang

"yes" answered crimson

"Why am I here and why are you inside my mind?" questioned Ling yang "it's because I bring you here and why am I here because of my punishment I am trapped inside you" answered crimson

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Author note:

I hope you rewrite and I decided to change nie li because I don't know where to start so I changed it and I like it