Beautifully written. Ah. The intricacy of the writing style made me very much enthralled and immersed in reading. Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful. I don’t think I can critique anything else. Narration is conveyed in a fluid manner, as well as the dialogue. Characters are dynamic as well. Grammar is obviously not an issue, however I do suggest you to break the large blocks of paragraphs because one tend to get intimidated in mobile. Overall, it’s a very good read. Keep up the good work.
the title of your chapters are rather odd. anyway i'm still giving five and hope you wont feel down but you could use some advise from your editors on how to put title on your chapterchapters properly. the flow is great but i am hesitant to spend and unlock your chapter because the title are appallin as i go on. it's a great piece, keep writing!