WizPThief
I feel like this story has a lot of potential I like the story do far I wouldn't mind seeing him be a hero since I've read so many anti hero's but at the moment it's kinda dull the main character doesn't have a goal or anything to do if you could at least give him a purpose that will be good oh and I also like the idea of how he gains a purpose over the course of the story then just give him one as soon he comes into the world gives good character development