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Wednesday

People have stopped harrasing  Bong Soon at  school.After school Bong Soon meets up with Soo Hyun.

Bong Soon: I've got some news.

Soo Hyun :What is it?

Bong Soon: I don't know how to say this

Soo Hyun: Get on with it.

Bong Soon: Okay brace yourself, you might not like what I'm about to say

Soo Hyun: Go on

Bong Soon: Well I've been doing some digging and some unexpected information came up.

Soo Hyun:What?

Bong Soon: Well according to one of my sources your dad was responsible for Mrs Chan's death.

Soo Hyun: (chuckles)Are you kidding me.

Bong Soon: No I'm serious .

Soo Hyun: But the guy who killed her went to prison .He even killed himself.

Bong Soon: He just took the fall for your dad.

Soo Hyun :Are you serious ?

Bong Soon: Yes I am.

Soo Hyun :Who is this source of yours ?

Bong Soon :I can't tell you yet.

Soo Hyun:Why not?

Bong Soon:  I have to protect the person's identity. 

Soo Hyun: So you just expect me to trust what some random person said.

Bong Soon: I'm asking you trust what I'm saying

Soo Hyun:(sarcastic) So not only is my dad a liar,womanizer, perve and control freak .I have to add kidnapper and murderer to the list.

Bong Soon: I'm sorry.

Soo Hyun: Don't be.

Bong Soon:There's something else.

Soo Hyun: What is he a terrorist too?

Bong Soon: No I think it's time we told Min Ho or Myung Soo .

Soo Hyun: Why ?

Bong Soon: I need one of them to find out why their mom was killed .She must've found something or seen something  for her to end up dead.

Soo Hyun: Can't we do this without them?

Bong Soon: I already thought about it ,we need one of them to help out so pick one.

Soo Hyun: Do you seriously think if I told them my dad killed their mom they'd still want to help .

Bong Soon :Well I hope so.They might want to help bring your dad down for their mom.

Soo Hyun: So now we're talking about bringing my dad down

Bong Soon: I know this must be hard on you but I'm just trying to help.

Soo Hyun: Yes it hard,you have no idea what it feels like knowing your father is such an evil person.You have no idea.

Bong Soon: Well I just can't sit back and watch. My friend needs help ,The Chan's need closure and you need your mom.

Soo Hyun: I hear what you're saying.

Bong Soon: So which  brother will it be.

Soo Hyun:Myung Soo ,I can't even look Min Ho in the eye now..

Bong Soon :Aish I was hoping you'd pick Min Ho .

Soo Hyun :(jealous) Why .

Bong Soon: Because you'd have to tell him.

Soo Hyun: Awe....

Bong Soon: Okay meet me tomorrow after school at the park.

Soo Hyun: The park?

Bong Soon: Yes do you have a better location?

Soo Hyun: I mean the park is just...

Bong Soon: You don't have a better location so that's that.Im going bye.

Thursday

Bong Soon asks Myung Soo to meet after school and gives him the location.

At the park

Myung Soo: I love the park.

Bong Soon: Me too.

Myung Soo: Is this a date ?

Bong Soon: No it's something bigger than that.

Myung Soo: Nothing could be bigger than a date with you

They walk up to Soo Hyun

Myung Soo: Omo what is he doing here?

Bong Soon: There's something we need to discuss with you.

Myung Soo: What is it?

Bong Soon: This might be a bit of a shock so brace yourself.

Myung Soo :You're scaring me

Soo Hyun: You should be scared.

Bong Soon: Well the thing is..

Myung Soo: What?

Bong Soon: We need you to find out what your mother was researching on when she died.

Myung Soo: And why do you need to know that?

Soo Hyun: Because we think it might be proof

Myung Soo: Proof of what?

Bong Soon: Proof that Mr Baek killed her.

Min Ho suddenly appears

Min Ho :What!

Bong Soon :Min Ho .

Min Ho: What Did you just say?

Bong Soon: How did you get here?

Min Ho: I followed Myung Soo, now answer me

Bong Soon: Well ...

Min Ho: Speak up !

Soo Hyun: You heard it right ,we think my dad killed your mom...Im sorry.

Myung Soo: That's not possible, the guy who was responsible already got punished

Bong Soon: It was the wrong guy.He just took the blame for his family's sake.

Min Ho: Where are you getting this information from?

Bong Soon: Well from a trusted source.

Min Ho: This is such a joke

Myung Soo :It really doesn't make sense.

Soo Hyun: I know it doesn't .

Min Ho: If it's true why would you be working against your father.

Soo Hyun: Because he has my mother.She's alive .

Min Ho: I don't know what drugs you're using but I was there at the funeral. I don't know why you guys are trying to bring back  painful memories.

Soo Hyun: But we buried an empty box .Her body was never found .

Min Ho: But it still doesn't add up.

Bong Soon: I know it doesn't but I saw her  .I saw her with my own two eyes. She was at the hospital she's in a coma

Myung Soo: Maybe you were mistaken.

Bong Soon: No I wasn't, I even took a picture

She shows them the picture

Myung Soo: (shocked) It is her

Min Ho: So you really are telling the truth.

Bong Soon: Yess.

Min Ho: If this is all true then why wasn't I invited to this little reveal party of yours .If I hadn't shown up when would you have told me?

Bong Soon: We just didn't know what to expect .

Min Ho: Awe so you weren't going to tell me.

Soo Hyun: I'm sorry I didn't know how to face you after this. I know how hurt you were when your mom died .I hated the fact that my dad made your family feel that way.I couldn't bare to see you hurt again because of my father .I'm sorry.

The Boys hug

Min Ho: What's done is done all that matters now is that he pays .

Bong Soon: We're all in.

Myung Soo: All in

Min Ho: All in

Soo Hyun: All in.

Myung Soo: So what now?

Bong Soon: We go meet my source.

They all leave the park and head to the noodle shop

Myung Soo: What are we doing here?

Bong Soon: You'll see.

They get inside and get settled. Bong Soon goes to the kitchen and comes back with Mi Nam

Soo Hyun :It's you.

Mi Nam: I'm sorry I was spying on you.

Bong Soon: This is Mi Nam, she's the daughter of the guy who was incriminated for your mother's death.

Myung Soo: Your new friend!?

Bong Soon: Yes her.

Min Ho: This keeps on getting twisted.

Bong Soon : You have no idea.

Soo Hyun: Is this why you'd always follow me after work.

Mi Nam: You knew

Soo Hyun: Yeah I just thought you had a crush on me or something.

Mi Nam: I should've hidden better.

Soo Hyun: Yeah you definitely are no ninja.

Bong Soon: (whispering to herself)Wow they even use the same phrases.

Min Ho hears her and chuckles

Myung Soo: So what did you find out?

Mi Nam: Well nothing much.I remember overhearing the guy who paid my father saying he works for Mr Baek.Eversince I've tried to get more information but I never get far.

Bong Soon: Well now you've got our help we'll get to the bottom of this.

Min Ho: How?

Bong Soon: Well I made a plan.

Myung Soo: You made a plan?

Bong Soon: Yes ,What?Can't I make a plan?

Mi Nam:When did you make the plan?

Bong Soon: Well it's all I've been thinking about.

Min Ho &Soo Hyun:Awe...

Bong Soon: Well anyway Myung Soo and Min Ho you're going to have to gather all the information your mother found when she did her research on Soo Hyuns mom supposed death maybe that will tell us to why she got murdered and that will give us more proof to help Mi Nam.Soo Hyun you have to find out what your dad's motive was ,and we also have to find out where your mom is.I will do some digging at the hospital to see if anyone knows what happened to her.

Myung Soo: Wow everytime I think I've

figured you out you show me something new.(he hugs her)You're the best!

Bong Soon: (shy)I did nothing .

Soo Hyun: If you're going to hug do it somewhere else .

Myung Soo: Aish jealous much?

Soo Hyun: (defensive) No..Why would I be

Myung Soo: Then I guess I'll continue hugging her.

Min Ho: Aish let's go home Dad must be waiting for us.And don't forget we have school tomorrow.

They all then disperse from the scene.Bong Soon drops Mi Nam of on her way home with Mr Cho.

Friday

Bong Soon wakes up to alot of messages from her friends back in Zimbabwe. They've all wished her a happy birthday which must be a sign of a good day ahead.

She gets downstairs and her parents seem to have forgotten. She leaves the house heartbroken but still optimistic that they'll remember.

School

Myung Soo: Good morning my lady.

Bong Soon:Well hello Good sir.

Won Ho: Arghh get a room.

Myung Soo walks her to her class then leaves her

Myung Soo: Have a beautiful day bye(he goes off)

Bong Soon: Even though he doesn't know it's my birthday he still puts a smile on my face.How weird.

After school

Myung Soo is waiting by the door for Bong Soon as usual.

Bong Soon: Don't you get tired?

Myung Soo: Never.

Bong Soon: Dummy

Myung Soo: So what's up for the rest of the day?

Bong Soon: Why ask?

Myung Soo: Just asking.

Bong Soon: Well I was going to pass by the hospital and check the CCtV footage .Maybe I'll find something there.

Myung Soo: Can I tag along?

Bong Soon: Sure why not, But I need to go home and change first .You can pick me up .It would be suspicious if they saw a couplekids wearing uniforms snooping around.Wear something which doesn't draw attention to you.

Myung Soo: Like that's possible .

Bong Soon: Stupid.

Myung Soo: Okay okay ,now get going before you insult me more.

the hospital

They get and head to the room but she still isn't there.The nurse sees them  and immediately informs Mr Baek

Mr Baek: Those kids are playing with fire ,careful to not get burnt.

Myung Soo and Bong Soon sneak into the CCtV room.They are lucky Myung Soo is good with computers but unlucky as they do not get the footage they want.

Bong Soon: This means were on the right path.

Myung Soo: Or barking up the wrong tree

Bong Soon: On dramas the criminal always clear the footage, but somewhere ,somehow they always leave a clue we'll have to find those.

Myung Soo:(teasingly)  You're really enjoying this huh detective Bong Soon

Bong Soon :(smiling )Yes I am, now let's leave before we get caught  .

As they are exiting they see some security guards coming their way .Bong Soon freezes. Myung Soo quickly pulls  her into an empty room.He places a hand on her mouth and whilst leaning over her keeps on looking out checking to see if they've gone.

Bong Soon' s hearts racing with the closeness between her and Myung Soo. She just stares at him.

Myung Soo: (looking back at her)Coast is clear.

She just keeps on looking at him.He gets lost in her eyes as well.

Her phone suddenly chimes breaking the connection between her and Myung Soo.

Bong Soon: Awe it's Soo Hyun he wants all of us to meet at this place.I guess  he found some new information.

Myung Soo: Okay let's go now.

They get to the place

Bong Soon: I get that this is a conspiracy and all but why is it dark in here and where is ....

"SURPRISE! "