Whisper's of my soul

(This is a rewrite of my first novel embracing the shadows because I was not able to connect to the story I decided to stop it if I cannot connect with it how will the readers even though most of the things will be the same I will change things that I didn't like, Atleast give it a try) Daemon is a normal boy who always tries hard in his studies for the recognition of his peers but fails to do so, even though he didn't have friends to play with and was often bullied for his long hair he never complained. Because he was not truly alone as there was one girl always with him and he thought everything would change with time. But the reality is cruel to everyone one day everything changed for him as he started to hear a voice in his head whispering how this world is cruel and you need power to control it. After some incidents which lead him to compel towards the darker side, he succumbed to the darkness within and let his other side out. How he will live a double life solving the mysteries of this world and the voice in his mind. How will his life change as the darkness engulf him? Let's find out. Even though the story is based in India for my Convenience I will change names because This is a story based on alternate earth and there will be many changes, not the same earth (I am a newby author and I hope you give me an honest response I am willing to correct my mistakes so write a review, English is not my first language just so you know) (I am writing this novel on my phone of course because I don't have money for buying a laptop.) ( patreon.com/Piyush_eternal ) (This is my Patreon account new to that too so tell me if anything is important for the time being. I will appreciate your support )