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When we were perfect

Amaimsz

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Amaimsz
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Do give my work a chance,you won't be disappointed. It's different from other stories with the male lead being the victim of destiny's cruel games. Warning:You are in for an emotional roller coaster filled with drama,struggle for love and change of personalities.

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Aleesha_Sakhawat
Aleesha_SakhawatLv1Aleesha_Sakhawat

This is amazing I really like it. You described everything so well that it seems to be real. I liked the character of Daniel he is epitome of matureness. You write so good keep it up.

Ayesha_Nadeem_7542
Ayesha_Nadeem_7542Lv1Ayesha_Nadeem_7542

I am really looking forward. Story is saddening but appealing. Especially Daniel what a wonderful person he is shown to be. I hope he gets happiness,he is really heartbroken.πŸ₯²

Aamna_Sajid
Aamna_SajidLv1Aamna_Sajid

Wow, never knew you could write it like this. I mean I am genuinely impressed sister. The character development is smooth and I am already in love with Silas. He is literally like me. I hope you put the same effort in remaining novel as you did in the start. Best of luck.β™₯β™₯β™₯

FieldRead
FieldReadLv14FieldRead

I enjoyed the story very much. The grammar and lack of editing sometimes was very annoying, but the story was worth it to me.

Nikolas_Ahlers
Nikolas_AhlersLv15Nikolas_Ahlers

I liked reading this book. Great characters and thought out plot. Only thing I didn’ like was the one month hiatus because I was really Into the book but overall it was good. Keep up the good work.

Lee_Sparrow
Lee_SparrowLv4Lee_Sparrow

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reliable_foodpoint
reliable_foodpointLv1reliable_foodpoint

I think you should give more insight into the surroundings. Maybe try changing the locations it will be more appealing. But no doubt it's a strong plotline you have developed. Keep it up I am here to support you beautiful.😻😻😻

The_Amna_World
The_Amna_WorldLv1The_Amna_World

Nice start for a story. It gets intense every time 😌. Especially, Daniel, he is shown as serious and broken at the same time. If you add more scenes about his last maybe it will give more inside about what made him like this. Anyhow, the story is amazing looking forward to reading more about it.

predominantt
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Hi! This is kerawood, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail. This contest is free entry.

Ayesha_5572
Ayesha_5572Lv1Ayesha_5572

What a ride this novel has been. Emotional,heart tickling and beautiful. Keep up the good work author, your writing truly amazes me. Best of luck for future work.❀❀❀

Lillian_Morgan_8902
Lillian_Morgan_8902Lv1Lillian_Morgan_8902

I think I will only leave hearts here for this amazing work. πŸ₯΅πŸ₯΅πŸ₯΅πŸ₯΅πŸ₯΅πŸ₯΅πŸ₯΅πŸ₯΅πŸ₯΅πŸ₯΅πŸ₯΅πŸ₯΅πŸŒ·πŸŒ·πŸŒ·πŸŒ·πŸŒ·πŸŒ·πŸŒ·πŸŒ·πŸŒ·πŸŒ·πŸŒ·πŸŒ·πŸ΅πŸ΅πŸ΅πŸ΅πŸ΅πŸŒΈπŸŒΈπŸŒΈπŸŒΈβ­β­β­β­β­β­β­β­πŸŒ πŸŒ πŸŒ πŸŒ πŸŒ 

Penelope_Octave
Penelope_OctaveLv1Penelope_Octave

I think the pace needs to be fastened a bit but the whole story and plot are fantastic. I love Daniel a lot. He is truly a gold-hearted person.πŸ’ŒπŸ’ŒπŸ’ŒπŸ’ŒπŸ’ŒπŸ’Œ Sending love.

Salaar_Adil
Salaar_AdilLv1Salaar_Adil

Woah! What a story. I loved your work and wish you all the best in your writing. Keep updating.πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“ Looking forward.

Landon_Coling
Landon_ColingLv1Landon_Coling

Amazing work, the poetry in the start really gives vibes. keep it up, the characters and whole cast is amazing,can't wait for the end. Xoxo

Zaim_Orsini
Zaim_OrsiniLv1Zaim_Orsini

I think you should work more on background skills but overall the plotline is great and I am looking forward to reading it. I already love Daniel and Silas. Good luck with your work.πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•

Murad_Ozan
Murad_OzanLv1Murad_Ozan

Hey! I just started reading your novel and it's amazing. Usually, stories in which the male lead is depressed are very few. Also, character design is good. Keep it up.πŸ’œπŸ’œ

Amelia_Orsini
Amelia_OrsiniLv1Amelia_Orsini

Wow, I am looking forward to reading your work. I usually don't read contemporary romance novels but it's different and appealing. I hope you continue to work on it. Lots of love ❀️ πŸ₯€πŸ₯€