liyanpark1013
I'm not rating my story yet I'm announcing about this story. for those who read my story, you can see that the chapters are deleted. the reason is this story is under revision. I'm working on revising my chapters but the end of the week so I could release the update chapters. please be patient with the new chapters that I'll release, hopefully on Sunday! I'll make it up to you guys! I love you all so much and peace out!
Fantasy genre is my favorite in terms of books and movies, which means I have a high standard on reviewing this kind of stories. The story was very well thought of, the characters was well developed but still need some time in order to make the readers care for them, while the world which is the most important part of fantasy genre books and movies is kinda lacking. Yes theres some parts where you are able to tell us what it was but i suggest to make it more alive, let the characters spend more time with the world and try exploring it. Overall this was a great book! Good job for the author