When our story first began...
novel - Fantasy Romance

When our story first began...


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What is When our story first began...

When our story first began... is a popular web novel written by the author mila, covering Fantasy Romance genres. It's viewed by 25.3K readers with an average rating of 4.76/5 and 38 reviews. The novel is being serialized to 29 chapters, new chapters will be published in Webnovel with all rights reserved.


When she takes your heart and disappears, and you keep drowning in your tears... When one life isn't fair enough, and it only get tough... When she falls for you, but can't stay because she's protecting you... When your love, isn't enough... To break the wall between two different lives...

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I love the approach to this story. Details make it more lovely band lively. Character development and interaction is spot on. in short it's a great book.


The synopsis is extremely interesting. Captivating story from the beginning, cant wait for more uploads. Characters are relatable and I grew fond of them as the story developed. Well written and easy to read. Excellent novel, well done. [img=recommend]


I love all the detailed feelings. I felt like I should have a box of tissue with me while I read this.. In a good way obviously🤩 Even when reading synopsis part one can feel how indepth the story is going to be! Good book all in all. Good luck and all the best.


A deeply moving tale,full of drama and deep emotions that helps you to relate to each character on a personal level.I love how the author gives you a clear view of the mind of each person.Lovely book!


Really like the way you described your characters, this was absolutely so much interesting to read. The storyline and grammar were on point, considering the content, it was very much engaging with the readers. keep it up.


Honestly, this is really amazing. Each word written in the next leads to more reading. I was glued to the story. My mind was screaming not to stop there, read… read… read The feelings expressed in the story, felt like real 💕 Whoaa!!!! This is an incredible masterpiece 😇❤   You have great future ahead with writing Mila 😍


The intriguing way of story telling is just out of the world, poetic narration of characters and their feelings, the constant melancholic feeling that keeps you stuck to the book, just like a bottle of wine. addictive and mind numbing. Amira you have this amazing power of beautifying the script, nourish it and I bet you will be a star.💖💖💖


Such a great story author , the blurb of your story is interesting, I love how your writing .The story is enchanting and so cool at the same time , keep it up author and great work. 🥰❤❤...


story that makes me stiff.very interesting to me and I have already fallen in love with your book.I hope you can write well in the next chapter because I am waiting for it


synopsis is so catchy that it makes you want to read it immediately. I don't know why but I couldn't stop myself from opening the chapters and as I read it.....it's painful. past is always painful I guess. Goodluck to the writer with her book. 😄😄😄


This book has a kind of bittersweet feel. I could feel the mc's emotions and it was obvious she was a lonely soul who kept mostly to herself. You have a talent of being able to weave words in the most meaningful ways that reach deep. I love your work and writing style dear. Keep up the good work🌹❤


The synopsis is very nice. I liked it very much!!! The plot seems quite interesting as well as the characters. Keep up the good work!!! Kudos to the author.


Interesting. Wow, I like how descriptive this is. The storyline is simply amazing! I'm a sucker for a good romance, and I must say that this story captures it very well. I sincerely recommend this book to everyone.


What an interesting narrative! Descriptions are plenty and provide easy visualization. Author has put a lot of work into this. Give it a read guys and show some love!


I never expected for this story to be not just so well detailed and discriptive, but I was surprised on how poetic some of the narration starting from Chapter 1. I don't usually read Fantasy Romance, but reading how she met the girl on the bus and how she flashbacks from six years ago, was so dramatic bad heartwarming that it made me read nonstop until chapter 5 so I can give this book a wonderful review. your book is really amazing, you are a talented Author.


Wow! Fantasy and romance all in one! Those are the two most genres I dooo love! Not to mention, I love reincarnation stories since most kdramas have those kinds of plotlines! Anyway, this is really good!


Ack! the beginning hooked me and now I am in chapter 8. This genre is different from the books that I usually read! It's a very unique reincarnation story. I would actually want to mention some characters but I prefer to let the readers learn more about them. Totally recommended!


I'm in love with reincarnations story! This is well written by the author, imma read it 'till the end. Kudos to you writer! Keep writing. Tho I saw errors, but keep bleeding!


I love the synopsis. I love the flow of the story. I highly recommend this one and looking forward for more scene cuz it excite me. Keep up a good work author.


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