When Devil's Fall In Love

To tell you honestly, I don't know how to review your story hahaha XD. Due to the fact that I dont read tagalog stories anymore which makes me more confused on how to critic them. Sorry about that. Tagalog is my 3rd language (1st Cebuano, 2nd English). But I can see how nice and awesome your story is. (Sorry for the pathetic me who almost crush my brains off because some tagalog words are too deep for my feeble mind to comprehend) If you can provide an english translation with the same content and descriptions that would be awesome! I'm sure many people will like your story. Great job author! Keep up the good work!

Super interesting story with a plot, I’m sure is bound to hook anyone who decides to read it. Unfortunately, I was unable to read further than the first chapter or so because I’m not bilangual, although I truly wish I was because I know this story is going to be great. I recommend all readers who can to check out this story because I know it has the roots of deliciously interesting and captivating piece! Props to you author! Evn though I could not read the entirity of your story I could tell it was going to be good. So, all I have left to say is that I wish you well author, keep up the amazing work!

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This is a wonderful concept honestly very smoothly flowing especially in the beginning, the portrayal of a cold heart softening in a beat and its journey is something i'd be really excited to read further! The plot seems like a switched gender thing from Lucifer the tv series hehe. A few things though... -Please put a translated version at the bottom of every chapter or in a different font because it breaks the flow of reading ! -The Devil is usually seen as a male maybe name it something a little more feminine because the character is female like 1. Ardat Lili This is the name of a young spirit or night demon who attacks children and women. 2. Batibat This name belonged to a vengeful demon belonging to Ilocano folklore. This demon is famous for causing death during sleep. This demon always stays in a tree. 3. Empusa This name belongs to a demon that is popular for eating travellers. The demon is said to have one leg made from brass, and the other one is a donkey leg. This demon is also associated with demi goddesses Lamia and Mormo. 4. Gorgon The demon name is a personification of wisdom and mysteries. The demon is the creator of life and the bringer of death. The name has a Greek origin, and the meaning of the name is “terrible”. 5. Hecate This name is the Latin variation of the Greek name “Hekate”, and the meaning of the name is “worker from far off”. In Greek mythology, this demon is the goddess of the underworld. 6. Jezebeth This is the demon who deceives people with her falsehoods. She preys on enraged and weak human and adds fire to the flame when they give in to their frustration. 7. Kasdeya This demon is also believed to have been the fifth Satan and is a demon that specialises in poison. 8. Kok-Lir this demon preys on wandering men and is Borneo’s succubus demon. 9. Lamashtu This name belonged to a witch. In Mesopotamian mythology, the demon was responsible for the death of unborn and newborn. She is also known for kidnapping children. 10. Lamia The name of a monster who kidnaps little children, the meaning of the name is “large shark”. In Latin, the name means “vampire”. 11. Lezabel This is a Hebrew name, and the meaning of the name is “intact and chaste”. She was the wife of Ling Ahab, and in mythology, she was a town by hounds. 12. Lilith Lilith is the Hebrew variation of the name “Lilitu” in Sumerian. The meaning of the name is “of the night”. In Hebrew myth, the name belonged to a storm demon in Mesopotamia responsible for death or diseases. 13. Lilitu This demon has goat horns, goat hooves, and a tail of a snake. She is one of the triads of the demon. The most disturbing feature is her eyeless face. 14. Mara Mara is maleficent female wrath, and it belongs to the Scandinavian folklore. In mythology, the demon is the primary cause of children’s nightmare. In Hebrew, it means “bitter”. 15. Nimune Also called the Niniane, the name belonged to an Arthurian sorceress. The demon is not completely evil, but her role makes her sound like a demon. 16. Pandora The meaning of Pandora in Greek means “all gift” but she is the person who unleashes evil to the entire world because of her curiosity. 17. Prosperine This demon is also known as the princess of Hell. She is also believed to be Baal’s mother. 18. Qarinah In Arabian mythology, the name belonged to a demon. It is said that people with second sight can see this demon in forms of a household pet. 19. Succubus Succubus belongs to powerful female demons, and her character is to attack men in their sleep. 20. Yuki Onna This demon is associated with snowstorms, and she always appears during horrifying storms as a tall, beautiful woman with black hair and blue lips. She lures people in remote areas to freeze them solid. Except this, all the best! pretty good bang!