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I like how the premise of this story somehow reflects our current society. You know, the rich be having a good life while the poor suffer. Anyway, I'm a fan of vampire stories and have read quite a lot. I can safely say that this story has potential. I especially like how you didn't go into the normal vampire trope but used something different like a genetic vampire. The term "GenAlucard" is a bit long tho in my opinion and can be difficult to remember for some people BUT it's still unique so I like it nonetheless đ Writing quality is good and comprehensible. I added this story to my collections so I'd be notified if there are updates. I'm looking forward to how this story goes! â¤ď¸
Honestly, I love the ingenuity and newness of your storyline. Itâs like a fresh, fantasical take on very familiar issues and it makes it easier to relate with the characters. I like the pacing and your overall tone and delivery, but I think you need to work a bit on your grammar construction and punctuation. Asides from that, this is a truly promising story and I think youâre doing an amazing job!
The synopsis has the hook that I'm looking for, and for the love of god, my head ached when I read about genetic engineering. Although I hesitated to read it as I'm not interested on any science-y novels, the way the author wrote this story flat out slapped me with the reality. I shouldn't judge without reading the contents lol and that's how good this is. I'm actually waiting for the next chapters, so I expect a chapter soon! THIS IS A MUST READ!
Writing is neat and good choices of words that could easily understand by the readers. The narration took a bit serious in the beginning but the author made sure to explain his/her ideas about the plotline, it is quite descriptive in fact, though long sentences sometimes bores the eyes, the story piques interest! A good read, keep up the work dear author!đđđ
The novel has a lot of potential love the way it started and how the story was developing i just think that there was a bit of long sentences. i dont know maybe its just me lol but i still though it was a good read like the fact at the end we know about this group that profited off past technology that was super interesting to me :) keep it up great story so far
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