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What if I was reborn in Naruto (Canceled)

Author: The_Insight
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What is What if I was reborn in Naruto (Canceled)

Read What if I was reborn in Naruto (Canceled) fanfiction written by the author The_Insight on WebNovel, This serial novel genre is Anime & Comics fanfic stories, covering action, adventure, reincarnation, anime, naruto. ✓ Newest updated ✓ All rights reserved

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hahrhrhzuwhwidifxujd (Read the book you casuals) Note: I don't own Naruto or anything that is not mine belongs to their original creators

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IINeeRoII
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It feels like wish fulfillment, like "it would be great if this happened" and then you go and write without considering the plot. Nothing is understood about the events, everything happens too fast. Your character doesn't question anything, he accepts practically everything as soon as he is reborn, there is no emotional transition or anything (You see Naruto and go after him, without considering the dangers of the world in which you are). There is no clarity in the dialogues and it is not understood who is speaking (paragraphs? points? stanzas? etc.) You do not take into account that it is the ninja world, therefore going to live with Naruto in chapter 1 is not very credible, being that he is the bearer of kurama. You need to edit chapters.

Shanky_S
Shanky_SLv5Shanky_S

man there are no gap between paragraphs. it's just one giant chapter whole in a single segment.. . . . . .

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